Reading Reviews for The Nightmare
3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by MrsAlbusPotter123 Breakfast and Books

8th March 2009:
awesome carrying on with it can't wait to read next chapter

i'll reveiw again if you reveiw mine

My twisted family


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Review #2, by wicKeDwitch1316 Breakfast and Books

26th February 2007:
Oh crud---very interesting. I think you have a great setup here for the story. Try to make your chapters a little longer, but besides that excellent job! Especially for your first fic! It would be really great if you could R/R my fic, it's called 'you just have to believe.' of course you don't have to, but it would be great to get some feedback. Again, great job, keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks!

I'm really not sure what I'm going to continue with, so I started a new story for now. I loved your fic!

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Review #3, by Kira Breakfast and Books

26th February 2007:
Yikes cliff hanger indeed. Was it a little short? Yeah. Is that a problem? Not really. It is really up to you to decide how much you need to say what you want to say. I liked how the boy in the relationship thinks everything is good and happy and bright while the girl is seeing flaws. Sigh, boys do have a way of doing that.

I think its interesting because it is original so that's a plus. There were a couple spelling errors but everyone's stories have those so don't worry.

Keep writing!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!

I love to write cliff hangers... just a thing I tend to do.
I'm hoping that once I get a plot thought out for this I will have longer chapters.
Yep, boys do have a way of doing that, and that was really what I wanted to catch.

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