oooh great story hope you finsh it is really good so far :) : ) :) Report Review
Good beginning to a story. It's really dark and sorta creepy, but in a good way. I like it, and it's different from the romance I usually read. Please update soon. This story seems really intersting, and I can't wait to find out what happens next with Lily ans Snape! Report Review
Well that was very different from any Dark Lord fics I've ever read. Very good though, in a sort of sickening way. Interesting to see what happens next.Author's Response: That it shall...as soon as I can find the inspiration to continue writing it...I'm glad you like it though! Report Review
OMG! That was...brilliant! The way everything was described has me like leaning really close to the computer screen! Oh my, i dont think i've ever read anything so well written. Well, all your stories are but this, well, i dnt knoo what to say! That was mad! Wow, yu must write more ^_^
Alex xxAuthor's Response: Well thank you very much. I know this is going to sound strange, but short though this story will be it will take a while. I know exactly where it's going to go, but I've got to rewrite it a lot to make sure that the tone stays that sort of spooky and dramatic. So it's slow coming, but coming it is. ;) Report Review
Whoa! Very intense chapter. That drew me in immediately and made me very curious. But the last part, about Voldemort smirking... That doesn't seem like something V would do. Draco, maybe, but not V. Author's Response: thanks! There's a reason behind the smirk...I don't recall what it is off the top of my head, but in my notes I remember I had a reason for it...and it'll come up later... ;) Report Review
Ahh I loved the beginning of this chapter. The description was wonderful, and I see that you have a plot layed oiut. I can't wait to see what will happen next in the story, but I know that I can't wait for it to be out.
LolheeAuthor's Response: Thank you! I'll keep that in mind. ;) Report Review
Wow. That was definitely very different from anything I've ever read before. I think you've just made me a fan of Dark Lord fics. I love how twisted and horrific you wrote this. The air of it all was perfect. I absolutely loved the ending. It's just so... I don't know the word for it. I just loved it all. It's going in my favorites along with a 10 for 10.
Gosh, I can't get over how much I loved this!!!
Praise to you, praise to you. Amazing writing.Author's Response: Yay! Thank you so much! :D Report Review
ohh! Its a realy good chapter! please update soon!
EmmaAuthor's Response: Thank you! And I shall try. ;) Report Review
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