Are you calling my mum poor?!
By the way, my cat ate my socks. (and my make-up, but that's not the point)
Eat my socks.
I'm insane. Don't say I didn't warn you. Report Review
Okay... now, can I have some more? please???.you nasty little ¤%&!!! Wow..., blackout! Wait, did I just write that? I dont know what came over me.
-Yes, you do.
-No, I don't.
-Yes. You. do!
-NO, I DON'T! Who are you anyway?
-I'm the voice in your head confirming that you are going mad waiting for more to read!
-Oh no, HELP ME! maybe if I had some more to read it would cure me??
-NO! NO! NO! DON'T GIVE HER MORE TO READ!
-Give me something to read! please help me before it's to late! Report Review
I think what he said was; Mooo! Report Review
Guess what?!! I'm back!
Thank you for answering my "reviews". It really made my day!*grinning*
James is so nasty. Love it!!
James could still be nastier you know!!Author's Response: Haha...I guess you'll have to see how nasty James does get...
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Hehehe... Nice... I like. Go Lily! He deserved a punch!Author's Response: Glad you liked it! He sure did deserve a punch!lol...Thakns for leaving a review!! Report Review
why does lily get all the fun?? lol, i wonder wat else james has in store from lily later onAuthor's Response: Lol...Thanks for leaving a review! Report Review
WHY!!?!!! oh god, why?!!! Why are 'innocent Lily' so mean to me?
10/10, I'm getting really fed up with your behaviour. But don't think you can shake me. No, I'll be here all untill you answer. Author's Response: Wow...you really do write a lot! Hehe...I've responded to all your reviews now. Happy?!?! Haha..Ok, anyways, thanks for leaving another review!! Report Review
Luv the story! please talk to me.
10/10. don't give up an this story! Norway depends on you!! well..., I depend on you!!Author's Response: Heh...I'll try updating very soon, I'm very busy with school work and such... Report Review
Wait wait!! i just rememberd what I wanted to say to you. Oh no, I forgot it again... no, no...wait.Oh, yes.
I know you proberbly think that I'm doing this on purpose(writing these "reviews"). but I'm not. you see, I love to write and talk english(although I'm not very good, as you might have noticed). But i only get to talk english Once a month. And talking to your english teacher about homework isn't very entertaining.
If this doesn't make you feel any better, you should know you are not the only one. I do this to others too.
ps:Keep in mind that I only do this because I love your story.
ps: ps: When I said that I was looking forward to when James meet the new and improved Lily, I was refering to the whole dialog, which might apear in the next chapter??(dialog is a word right??) I was not referring to the little teaser in chapter two.
I don't want you thinking. "Oh my god!! The crazy stalker says she loves my story and she hasn't even read it!!"
ps:ps:ps: I'm sorry for that all of my "reviews"(this is starting to look like a chat-room) are so long.
Yours sincerely( not quite sure what that means, but oh well) Oda.(I know Oda is a stupid name, but we can't all have some cool english name you know!! it's not my fault I was born in Norway.*sob*..)
11/10 (god, how childish of me)Author's Response: Cool, you were born in Norway...I was born in Canada....so plain. I don't mind your reviews...I enjoy them! Thanks for leaving yet another review!!!! Report Review
I've just realized something!!! I'm a stalker, and the only way to get rid of me is by posting the next chapter...
Have I told you my plan for the future?? I'm going to move to England and marry someone named James. I love the name James.and James, of course.
love your story.
you know what, sometimes reviewing is more fun than actually reding the stories!!
BY THE WAY, what I really wanted to talk to you about was that I'm feeling kinda hurt. Why aren't you responding to any of my reviews?? Why don't you like me??? is it because I talk to much??? i can stop if you want to(that's not entirely true)?... anywaysss...*stops to think* WHAT?? noone can hate me. no, I know what it is... You are too busy writing the next chapter aren't you??? well, apology excepted.
I know that most of, no everything I've just said is quite of topic, but stay with me. I love the way Lily is so hurt... it just makes James's coments so much worse. and I think I've already told you how much i liked that twist(can I call it a twist??.wow, deja vu!!)
Love the story. And I'm starting to get quite fond of you too. even though I'm the only one doing the talking.
You know what? I've written essay's shorter that this "review".
10/10, of course.
and one more thing(didn't think I was done did you??!!Mwhaaa!!).Great, now I forgot what I was going to tell you. oh well. I'll get back to you.
Update ASAP!!! Author's Response: Ahhhh! You're a stalker!?!?!? I guess I have to update really soon! Haha!
Anyways, yeah, you can call it a twist, and yup, I'm quite busy with the next chapter! Thanks for leaving another review!!!! Luv you! Report Review
i'm bored. I want more to read!! Is James gonna met the new Lily soon? is he? is he? is he? just thinking about it makes me feel like...ehmm.. like i've just had 10 cokes!!
tra-la-la-la-la.la...ZzzZzz... *the suggar wears off*.zzZzz...
10/10, as always.
You know I love you right? okay, soI don't. But I will if you post the next chapter soon!!Author's Response: Awww! Thanks! I'll update soon! Report Review
You know, the more I think about this story the more I like it! yeah, so there you have it. I love your story... can't wait for more. I kinda love James when he's like this, it's a nice twist. (can I call it a twist?, hmm.. not sure)
Oh my god! You aren't going to abandon this story are you?!!? I should warn you, I am Don *cough* Mariano's ...eh.cusins brothers son..I mean daughter in law!!! Get it?!
okay, so I'm just kidding, but don't you dare break my heart by abondoning this story.
I feel so left alone right now. You know, without anything to read...
10/10 and that goes for the whoel story. Even though I haven't read it yet. *grinning*Author's Response: Hehe...Omg!! 10/10! Wow...
Thanks for leaving a review, and don't worry, I won't break your heart, I'm going to write this story up to the end!!! Report Review
I kinda like that James and Sirius was so mean to her. I've read like a gasillion differnt fics were James were almost too nice... love the story!! update ASAP!! I just learned what that means, haha... Author's Response: Hehe...Thanks! I'll try updating soon, I'm really busy with school and stuff. Report Review
luv it plz update asapAuthor's Response: Thanks!! Report Review
hi!! I really like your story- its excellent. *^-^* but i dont know if you've read the storey Enigma but the main character's name is Michelle Matthews.idk if you took it or not, i just thought i should let you know...very good though, excellent start. =-]Author's Response: Oh! I didn't know that. That's kinda weird...Glad you liked it, though!
Thank you for leaving a review!!
ahhwww james is being really horrible.. so sad. but isn't it a bit harsh if James starts liking her because she looks hot now? Ah well, i'll just have to wait and see.. The chapters are a bit short though..!Keep up the good workAuthor's Response: Yup...you'll have to wait and see!
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Great start to the story, I can't wait to read more! I totally sympathise with Lily, James was a real nasty idiot to say something like that to her. 10/10 =)Author's Response: Wow..10/10!! Thanks!!
And thanks for leaving a review, i'll try to update soon! Report Review
i like it, there's lots of tension here. I want to read more more more! Author's Response: Glad you liked it!! There's going to be more tension later on. Thanks for leaving a review!! Report Review
that was a really good chapter. please put the new chapters on soon! ASAP!Author's Response: Aw..thanks! I'll put up a new chapter soon!! Report Review
Oh my god I hate James and Sirius in this fic! What the hell was Remus doing when they were being so horrible to the girls?! Urgh-great setup for Lily's "hatred" of James, though in this case she probably does hate him---I would. Great job for your first fic! Update soon!Author's Response: Yeah...James and Sirius are pretty nasty right now. Thanks for leaving a review. I'll update soon!! Report Review
Oh! Such a good start!!! Sounds like a great plot!!! And thanks so much for the review for my story!
10/10Author's Response: Thanks!!! No problem, your story was fantastic! I was so close to tears reading it. Report Review
I feel so sad. *tear tear,* but on the bright hand I HAVE to read more. Please?Author's Response: Yeah..it is pretty sad...
Anyways, thanks for leaving a review...I'll update as soon as I can! Report Review
That was really sad !I cant wait until you update!you should read ma story!the marauders r jerks in that too!
sweetsilvermoonAuthor's Response: Thanks for leaving a review..I'll be sure to check out your story!! Report Review
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