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Review #1, by thefunnynamedperson2134

11th March 2007:

AW! OMFG Melisa! I didn't know you were that good at writing!!! I still caught some typos, though. It was good, it was like it could actually happen in the last book. I just wished Fred would've lived. C u next monday. Sorry I didn't can't make ti Zack's today. The 'rents and I are going to a movie and I really don't won't to miss 'Wild Hogs'. Later Tater!!

Author's Response: yes well i wanted to kill one of the twins because it helped highlight the impact of voldemorts ruthlessness. im a very cruel author....

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Review #2, by potterchic4eva

The Next Great Adventure

6th February 2007:

that was good. really good

Author's Response: thanks! reviews encrouage me to write more =]

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Review #3, by sirussnape121

The Next Great Adventure

6th February 2007:

I love how harry talks like Dumbldore to Voldemort

Author's Response: well, harry did truely respect dumbledore. it was harrys way of paying a lasting respect to his memory, ya know?

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Review #4, by Crosby

The Next Great Adventure

6th February 2007:

GREAT one shot, very very good. You spelled Voldemort wrong though lol. it says voldemold (i like that though lol). i really liked this one, it wasnt all happily ever after. 10-10

Author's Response: i wanted it to be voldemold. harry was slandering voldemorts status, similar to how ginny might call him "tom". but thank you =]

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