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Review #1, by IntoTheDarkness Chapter Two (a whole new world)

18th August 2009:
i really like the idea of this and your speech is pretty good, but you need more description in it, you need a break from the speech. and also, rather than describing the reasons she bought a book (last chapter, i know) decribe her surroundings and stuff. anyway. keep making me laugh :)

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Review #2, by MarauderAddict Prolouge

4th January 2009:
Coolies.

You've got the Lily/james arguments down pat.

ERm, can't really think of anything

The story is going gr8 and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Have fun writing!

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Review #3, by chelsie_potter338 Prolouge

15th February 2007:
i think it was a good story.so hurry up and make a new chapter

Author's Response: thanx a bunch! i want to make chap 2 really long but i'm almost done.

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Review #4, by HermyGranger Prolouge

13th February 2007:
it's quite entertaining so far, although you can't really say a lot after only the first chapter. still, good start and I'll continue reading.



Author's Response: thankyou! i know, but you get the general idea about the story wth this.

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Review #5, by Japaneze gurl Prolouge

5th February 2007:
this is good! for a first timer but trust me you will get better, it reminds me of the first story i wrote so i will give you some advice that helped me, read books! it helps your grammer and story ideas, make chapters longer! it keeps reviewers interested, and have confidence when your writing! i believe you can become a good writer!

~japanese gurl~

Author's Response: Thank you for the advice! I know that my grammer is a bit off, I never have been good at spelling and grammer. I know that it was short, it was just kind of to give some backround info. Chapter two will defenitly be longer, after I finish writing it...which I:) Once again, thanx so much, and I've read part of 'she listens' I love it!

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Review #6, by FullSilverMoon Prolouge

4th February 2007:
yay! i luvd it, but u already knew that! so wee! hurry up and update! and email me!

~Rachel

Author's Response: I just knew you'd love it! The fact that you read it before and told me gave me a bit of a clue...but thankyou! I'm already done most of chap 2 so keep a look out for it!

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Review #7, by al3x Prolouge

4th February 2007:
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I quite liked it, i think the idea is fantastic!... But your way of writing is a bit off putting. Im not sure what it was about it but the paragraph about where the book comes from and the ravenclaw muggle-borns really confused me =S. I did like it though =]...but there were a lot of grammar and a few punctuation and spelling mistakes i think. But overall quite good. Ill be looking out for the next chapter =D

Alex xx

Author's Response: thankyou!!! I'm not a very good writer, i was trying to give more backround info by saying how and why she bought the book. It was a bit unnecessary...thanx anyway!

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