{reviewid: 1552321, reviewer: 'hprulestheworld'}
4th August 2007:
haha. great story! for the next chapter please make james dump sophia! :)
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{reviewid: 1389184, reviewer: 'NeLLyRaE'}
21st April 2007:
it was pretty good, kinda unlikely, a lot of grammar/typos/grammar mess-ups, you might want to watch out for that.
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{reviewid: 1388960, reviewer: 'perfect_lily'}
21st April 2007:
you love cliffhangers don't you? great story! love the monkeys idea
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{reviewid: 1388672, reviewer: 'Jammytart123'}
21st April 2007:
This is really good so far! i would give you some suggestions, but i need to know who said the: "AHA I GOT YOU NOW!" Because if i was wrong then my suggestion wouldn't be all that good. lol
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{reviewid: 1388603, reviewer: 'Smart_Guys_Girl'}
21st April 2007:
I love your story! it's simply amazing...it keeps me laughing =]
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{reviewid: 1388328, reviewer: 'wicked26'}
21st April 2007:
was it sophia who shouted?
fantastic chapter specially alice and sirius. wel may be you can make james n lily friends for now... and please make james break up with sophia!!
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{reviewid: 1388252, reviewer: 'iforgot'}
21st April 2007:
so goood write more plesze so exciting but y does lily suddley like james?
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{reviewid: 1388251, reviewer: 'iforgot'}
21st April 2007:
so goood write more plesze so exciting but y does lily suddley like james?
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{reviewid: 1388149, reviewer: 'kitty'}
21st April 2007:
more please i thorgt it was good
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{reviewid: 1388125, reviewer: 'lilypotter16%28yestheperson%20right%20below%20me'}
21st April 2007:
i didnt mean 10/123
i had like a million out 0f 123
so your rating is
1 miillion/123
1,000,000,/123
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{reviewid: 1388124, reviewer: 'lilypotter16'}
21st April 2007:
ah why did you leave it here???
its getting really good you have to updateee!
10/123
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{reviewid: 1388119, reviewer: 'lilypotter16'}
21st April 2007:
eekk this story gets better and better! i appsolutly love it, its a great fan fic! cant wait to read the third chapter which ill be doing in like 1 minute actually less but anyways
101.10
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{reviewid: 1388116, reviewer: 'secret_witch'}
21st April 2007:
Well...where do you want this story to end? Do you want all marauders to have a girlfriend at some point? If so then you may want to talk about Remus a bit. Also you'll need to explain that person that's jumped out...is it friend or foe? Don't know if I helped at all but I hope I did.
Really good chapter, please update ASAP. 10/10
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{reviewid: 1388106, reviewer: 'lilypotter16'}
21st April 2007:
omg this is really good for a first fic!
i love it
i cant wait to read the next chapter and find ou t what james is doing
o wait i dont have to its up! yeaH!
10/10
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{reviewid: 1388063, reviewer: 'tearyloser'}
21st April 2007:
Hey! I'm loving it so far! Keep writing! It's made me laugh like, a kajilion times! Hehehe.
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{reviewid: 1374991, reviewer: 'shoot%20for%20the%20moon'}
11th April 2007:
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{reviewid: 1374968, reviewer: 'shoot%20for%20the%20moon'}
11th April 2007:
uh-oh.what now?
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{reviewid: 1356617, reviewer: 'AshHa'}
27th March 2007:
Good story! Update soon! Ha, monkeys in Lily's head! Hilarious. 10/10
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{reviewid: 1348363, reviewer: 'harryswife'}
20th March 2007:
write more!
Author's Response: Yaey! You reviewed, I feel so happy, tear tear. Don't worry I already have the next chapter cominout pretty sort of soon.
Thanks for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 1347212, reviewer: 'iluvsnogging'}
19th March 2007:
WOW CHICK FIGHT! GO LILY!!! I like the monkeys of course! Well hurry up with the second part I want to know more about these monkeys. Oh and see how Lily does in the fight! Well keep on writing! Love ya always your iluvsnogging friend!
Author's Response: Glad you liked the monkeys they're sort of a funny part of the story, well I'll make sure to check up on your story, thank you so much for reviewing, you will get a piece of candy, if I don't eat it first!
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{reviewid: 1340456, reviewer: 'secret_witch'}
14th March 2007:
Brilliant chapter...really like the fight and trust Sirius to get Lily into trouble. Please update soon 10/10
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you liked it.
Thank you so much for reviewing! You're awesome!!
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{reviewid: 1340371, reviewer: 'mioneronweasly'}
14th March 2007:
omg that was good i cant wait to read more plzzz update soon plz
Author's Response: Yeah, I feel so happy that people are reviewing, it makes me feel so appreciated. Thanks for revewing!
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{reviewid: 1340095, reviewer: 'wicked26'}
13th March 2007:
great chapter... but monkeys??
keep updating
Author's Response: Yeah, the monkeys are sort of what she wants to do and her conscience.
Thank you SO much for reviewing!!!
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{reviewid: 1340013, reviewer: 'lilyflower1022'}
13th March 2007:
oh i really like this story! you should update really soon
Author's Response: Thank you, I am very glad that you liked it.
I hope you read and review again, thanks.
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{reviewid: 1339966, reviewer: 'mioneronweasly'}
13th March 2007:
that was really good there was a few mistakes but it was really good!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'll be sure to look over it, and resubmitting it.
Thank you very much, I hope you keep reading it!
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