I like how you left the ending hanging, although I didn't really like your characterization of Hermione. Maybe this is just because it's a Draco/Hermione fic, which I'm not fond of, but she just seems kind of out of character. Actually, Hermione reminds me a little bit of one of my friends here, but that's not a bad thing. Good job!Author's Response: thankz.
...You didn't even write his answer! Aww, come on! You were talking my cliffie in my story. At least I wrote a sequel. :p Author's Response: hahahahaha.
I wrote this b4 i read yours.
but that's a weird cawinkidink =p
SEQUEL! ... plz? Report Review
Umm...it was good but your spelling and grammar was a bit dodgy and Hermione's character was a bit all over the place. There's got to be a reason why she suddenly likes Malfoy. Another thing...you should start a new paragraph everytime someone speaks. It just makes it easier for everyone to read. Report Review
great! One of my favourites. But... what does Draco say? Is there a sequel? Lol, sorry for all the questions.:P I just loved it, thats all. Ok bye.Author's Response: I'm thinking about a sequal i just have to find a song i like. haha Report Review
Sequel sarah! Report Review
Oh no! What does he say? There has to be a sequel!Author's Response: i never thought of that but okkk Report Review
I liked it alot. Report Review
... it was good and different, i liked it.
~alyssa Report Review
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