hey :) i loved this chapter, but i think you should really fix the spacing; it makes things easier to read. all in all, it was pretty good.

&as for your banner; i'd be happy to make one for you; just email me at erinv760@hotmail.com if you want.

Author's Response: OMG YES!!! thankyou sooo much,, i will email you!


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hey :) i loved this chapter, but i think you should really fix the spacing; it makes things easier to read. all in all, it was pretty good.

&as for your banner; i'd be happy to make one for you; just email me at erinv760@hotmail.com if you want.

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aww i lovedd itt. it wass really cutee.

Author's Response: ohh thankyou so much,, glad you enjoyed it!!

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Wonderful chapter.
Can't wait for what will come next.

Author's Response: thanks a heaps!!! and thanks for reviewing heaps,, pretty sure its great.. working on chappie 5 now shouldnt be too long.

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LOVE IT!!! Cant wait till the next chapter! ^.^

Author's Response: WOO THANKYOU SOO MUCH!!! CHAPTER 4 IS WAITING!!! shouldnt be too long.

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Some minor spelling errors, but most excellent chapter.

Author's Response: YEH IM NOT THE BEST SPELLER IN THE WORLD, BUT AHH WELL. THANKS FOR READING.


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I love your story! It rules!

Author's Response: thankyou heaps!!

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Great chapter.

Author's Response: thankyou..

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This is good, but your making them sound american, not Brithish. They wouldn't say "dude" But "mate". And why not try "Bloody Hell", "bugger" or "piss-off"

Sorry for being a nag, it was just bugging me.

Becca

(ps, this story rox!)

Author's Response: thanks ill keep that in mind.. thanks for reading.

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I LOVE ELLIE !!
very good story, i wanna hear more !!
xoxo

Author's Response: I LOVE ALICE!!!! hehe woo im so the best, and pretty sure you are awesome alice!!

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NO! Don't give up I think it was a great start. Can't wait to read what will come next.

Author's Response: lol, thankyou,, aan im not giving up i dont think no yet, i have upto chapter 3 written, just waiting for chapter 2 to be validated.

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woo,, go you, loving the Nikida name woo!!

Nikida FTW!!

Author's Response: WOOO!!! thankyou!!! now go play ya wow cos i no that took u half an hour to read you little retard hahah love you!!!! xoxoxoxoxoxp.s. no u love ****

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I LOVED IT. uhm yeah your not giving up. even if im like the only one that liked it. ha. i prob sound like a total loser. whaterers. anyways keep it up.

Author's Response: Thankyou!! and dont worry im not giving up,, not yet anyways. chapter 2 should be up soon,, hopefully

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continue this story rox!

Author's Response: Thanks Heaps!! glad you like it..

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cool start.i love simple plan :D.and by the way it's regulus not regulas:P

Author's Response: thankyou,, i love simpleplan, and i had a feeling it was wrong but im too lazy to find out if it was right or not thanks for telin me lol

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It is awesome! Write More!:) :P

Author's Response: thankyou very much. xo.

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This is really good! please update soon!

Author's Response: thanks. chapter 2 should be up soon.

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It's great I'm not really good at commenting people so that's all I can say.

Author's Response: thankyou,,,

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This story is great!!! carry on with it!

Author's Response: thankyou so much,, and i am planning to continue it, for now anyways.

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This story is great!!! carry on with it!

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