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Review #1, by Haunted_Lyra22 Wait for Him

12th April 2007:
im not trying to be mean here or anything cos if ur like me u try to write fluff but it always ends up like this...it moves too fast and if u slow down and try to put a little more feel into it and more details it might work better cos i have to the same thing for my self...i liked her being tonuge tied around him after she started questioning her feelings for him, it was very realistic.trust me i kno from past experience *mutters about how stupid boys are* but anyway it was good but i still think u can do better!! just trying to encourge here!!^_^
-Lyra

Author's Response: yeah, as far as fluff goes, I don't have much experience making it harder for me to add an extended amount of details. There are some parts I have more experience with, such as being utterly oblivious or becoming tongue-tied once you do know, but as far as the falling in love part, so far mine hasn't been especially fairy tale-like. This is one I know needed more improvement on so thanks for the suggestions.

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Review #2, by wicKeDwitch1316 Wait for Him

11th April 2007:
Aw. Charlie is absolutely adorable. THE perfect boyfriend. But that Joel guy isn't very nice. Laura should break up with him for being a berk. Very cute for your first fluff/romance kinda stuff. I really don't have any criticism except maybe you can make it longer? But it is a one-shot so that doesn't really matter. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks. I was a bit out of my realm and something I did to challange myself and test my limits. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review!

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Review #3, by icecube Wait for Him

9th April 2007:
its so cute i want charlie to be my boyfriend...i heart this story its amazing

Author's Response: thank you! Charlie is really sweet isn't it. Not really my type but definately someone I can see being particularly likable and/or popular.

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Review #4, by harrypottersangel Wait for Him

24th February 2007:
Aw!! That was adorable and I loved it! Went perfectly with the challange. Excellent job.
Keep writing!
Love ~K (10/10 in favs)

Author's Response: Thank you. When you urge me to keep writing I hope you don't mean on this one because it's just a one-shot, sorry. If you mean overall, then no worries I will! I'm glad this made it into your favs and diserved top rating. Thank you!

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Review #5, by greendayrocks Wait for Him

15th February 2007:
aw theyre cute

Author's Response: Finally my first reviewer for this. THANK YOU! I'm glad you liked it. It was my first try at fluff so I hope I managed to pull it off.

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