aww... it was amazing :D Report Review
This story was probably the first one I read on this site. I was just a guest at that time, looking for a good story. When I found this treasure, I could not believe my luck. Upon reading this story, I became SO devoted that I decided to register and leave you a review. As I mentioned before, I LOVE this story and re-read it frequently. I think you have done a simply outstanding job on everything in this story. *100,000/10* Many, many huggles and kisses, R_Star_ Report Review
it was a sweet story...nice..liked it very much Report Review
Okay, this is my first review, and I must say, I LOVED YOUR STORY. It was so cute and romantic (not to mention it had its funny parts!) I loved that you turned draco pink! The ending was so cute! The only thing I was disapointed in was that the story ended! ^^ Hope you liked my reveiw! Report Review
DEAR DARWIN, MY EYES. A curtain, my dear, is what you hang in front of your window. CERTAIN is the word you were looking for. In addition to this complaint, you chose a horrible way to begin your story. You keep your character's profile to yourself and let the reader learn about them through their actions--Don't just give a blatant introduction like that. Also, watch your punctuation, grammar and spelling. I'd say more, but it's simply too much to say, considering you're writing at the level of the average fifth grader. When you've gotten past the basics of becoming a decent writer (those are: spelling, grammar and punctuation), feel free to contact me. I'd be happy to advise you in great detail on ways to avoid cliches, develop good characters and pre-plan your plot. Whether you have DeviantART or not, you can find my E-mail there. My username is Zerohope2survive. Also, don't take this as a flame or a troll. By definition, it can't be either of those if I really want to help. Report Review
AMAZING!!! love it!!! great story!!! :-) xxx ps can you read my ff 'three little words'? thanks Report Review
really good, love it!!! :-) xxx Report Review
good start, nice idea!!! LOVE the story so far!!! :-) xxx Report Review
awesome story ! LOVED IT !!!Author's Response: Well, thank you! Report Review
Amazing! Absolutly amazing! I've just read the hole story and I can actually hear my heart beat and my breath is really fast. I'm not quite sure i can put down in words what makes the story so damn good! Bur it sure is! It's amazing! Sorry to repeat myself but that is just the very best word about the story! Amazing! Again I'm deeply sorry but this amazing story it just got to me! Sure there were a couple of mistakes in the spelling but the story... I just couldn't nor wouldn't stop reading! Sorry but AMAZING!Author's Response: Well if I'm not mistanken then you really liked this;) Thank you for reading, I'm glad you think this was worth your time:) Report Review
Another great chapter!Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. Report Review
I think your story is very well written! But, I just wanted to let you know that Malfoy's "henchman" is named Crabbe, not Grabbe.I was thinking that maybe you got the names mixed up, because of the name: GoyleAuthor's Response: I know that, I guess I just made a mistake in this chapter;) I'll fix it. Thank you for reading and reviewing. Report Review
O.M.G. I finally found a good Draco/OC! *dances around happily* =D So far, so good! I love Dianna. Gonna be god! By the way, if you know any other Draco/OC stories that I might like, would you let me know? I'd really appreciate it. Great so far! Marauders_xxAuthor's Response: Well Draco/OC isn't always easy to write, but I do know a really good one called My Little Piece of Chaos by elle_silver. I have it as a favourite. Glad you liked Dianna:) Thank you for reading and everything! /D i a Report Review
I'll give you one word. Lovely. Sufficiant?Author's Response: Thank you:) Report Review
weird.. harrypotterfanfiction seemed to cut off my last review. It did it twice actually.. the secomd timei thought of copying and pasting it just in case. SO here it goes: wow, Wow.. WOW! *insert love hearts that hpff doesnt seem to like* I'm not usually a Malfoy fanfic fan but you convinced me that it is a somewhat worthwhile genre. You deserve a much longer and more praiseful review but I need sleep.. Awesome story and I can't wait to read 'the proposal' (except it'll have to wait due to sleep and uni.. grrr...). Keep up the good work and much love, Nat. p.s. tap-dancing penguins rock my world. p.p.s I LOVED the use of the kitchens =D.Author's Response: I hate when it does that! I never seem to find the patience to write the good review I originally had... I'm glad you liked the story though, it was my very first longer fanfic and I'm still proud of it:) Thank you for reading and reviewing. Report Review
wow, Wow.. WOW! Author's Response: Hehe, Thank you for reading and reviewing. Report Review
Wow. Wow. Great story! Funny, sweet, interesting! Read it from beginning to end without a break, that's how good it is! Because I usually take breaks. Even if it's just a small break to check facebook, but I didn't do that:) That last bit in this chapter made cry a little bit, of happiness, because it was so sweet: "I'm not going to break her heart." 10/10 and favorite:)Author's Response: Oh I'm glad to hear that. This was the very first longer fanfic I ever wrote and the first piece this long in English so I'm still very proud of it:) Thank you for reading and reviewing:) Report Review
Awww. That's so cute!!! I love it!!! Now I'm going to have to go read the rest of your stories!!Author's Response: Thank you! You're welcome to read and review all you want. Report Review
he won't break her heart. awww. i'm a hopeless romantic, that got me good! loved the story. cheers!Author's Response: I'm a hopeless romantic sometimes too so welcome to the club:) Thank you for reading and reviewing:) Report Review
AWESOME! that was so good!Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
huh? what just happened! katrina was very defensive, well written. i like her confusion at waking up in the kitchen.Author's Response: I would be confused too if it happened to me;) Thank you for reading and reviewing. Report Review
oh cute. i like the idea of secret friends. and the penguin is adorable! i like how she kept draco in the dark about the christmas tree. you're very creative.Author's Response: The secret friends is actually something we've tried atmy school one year for christmas:) Thank you for reading and reviewing. Report Review
cute. i like the new side to malfoy, keeping his infamous smirk around too!Author's Response: He has to have the smirk or he would be out of character. Thank yo for reading and reviewing. Report Review
nice touch... i liked the ginger bread. very well written.Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
ooh, that's just great! amazing! pink ferret! you are my hero! and i've read your other story before, the one you excerpted in chapter5, i loved it too!Author's Response: I love pink. A lot! So of course he had to be the pink ferret:D Thank yo for reading and reviewing. Report Review
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