Love the idea behind the entire story.
However there are some minor grammar mistakes.
ElvengirlAuthor's Response: Thanks ^^ I know about the grammar, I'll fix it when I got the time... :/ Report Review
Aww, I wanted Ron to miraculously come back to life! But of course that wouldn't happen, plus that would make it an unrealistic story. I think it's wonderful, very saddening, and it evokes the right emotions. The song you chose fits so well with the story. Poor Hermione, poor Ron. 9/10Author's Response: Aaaw! Thanks! ^^ Report Review
I have only two words for you: GREAT STORY!
Kinda sad and depressing but absolutely amazing. (Adds to favs.) : )Author's Response: Really? Thank you! :D Report Review
That was a really well written story. It went along great with the song, and I could feel what Hermione was feeling. 10/10Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! I was thinking of deleting this story because it didn't went that well, but you made me want to keep it a little longer ^^ Report Review
i loved it.
this is an awesome song and an awesome story.
ps.i just wrote my first sonf-fic too and you should check it out.
it would mean a lot to me.
your writing is great.=DAuthor's Response: Aw, thank you! I wasn't sure if I made it sad enough, but at least one thought it was. ^-^
I'll check out your story right now :D Report Review
Your story only seem to half way a capture the emotions. You need to try harder. Good stort though.Author's Response: Haha. Yeah, I know. I'm not good with the emotion stuff.. =/ but thank for reviewing anyway ^^ Report Review
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