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8 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Diana Garcia

Chapter One

16th July 2009:

THAT WAS AWESOME YOU SHOULD CONTINUE

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Review #2, by lovette

Chapter One

18th April 2008:

please continue love it

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Review #3, by Witch living as muggle

Chapter One

15th September 2007:

please write more chapters Soon! and if not can u make them longer i really like this story :)

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Review #4, by Harryz Girl

Chapter One

16th April 2007:

This is the AWESOMEST story. Okay so I made up awesomest WHATEVER!

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Review #5, by HottForHarry328

Chapter One

23rd February 2007:

i like the story, and wish that you would continue writing

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Review #6, by Ethera Step

Chapter One

22nd February 2007:

Good feelings in terms of characters, but I think that all of a sudden having this "son" come intothe story was a little to fast. Maybe you could explain more about Clair, and their life together, or about his past girlfriends that might give a hint to why a son is all of a sudden there. But, of coarce, I don't know where this is heading, and I think you should go on. Maybe it will all click with more knoledge and story that is to come. Keep at it! I like your stile of writing. It draws you intot he character's perspective! Fabuloso! :)

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Review #7, by gottalovesnape

Chapter One

19th February 2007:

very cute story so far
i hope you continue it

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Review #8, by Piper_Bridget

Prologue

19th February 2007:

YES!! Keep writing!!! I think you should. The only thing that I don't like is how short the chapter is. 10/10!! I will definately add this to my favorites!

Author's Response: Woohoo! My first review! Thank you so much. The next chapter has just been uploaded. Chapter Three should be up soon. Thanks again.
Mrs_Tom_Welling

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