damn.u just like killing malfoy dontcha?
haha.i love it though.
tshould be interesting.
cant wait till u update. :D Report Review
Well, this is kind of depressing. The situation looks really hopeless, I don't want to see 'Mione go to Azkaban! :-(Author's Response: :) Dum dee dum. I'm a depressing sort of person. The situation is what it is, but it's all good. I'm sorry, and if you don't want want to read it then that's alright. You can't please everyone, and it's alright if you don't like it. I do hope, however, you give it a little more of a chance. Report Review
i really love this story. i love the format that it is writen in. keep it up.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'll be sure to try! Report Review
It was great! Loved it... ROCK ON!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it! Report Review
haha hermione's mom is so cool. lol. you did a great job with her character. your story is so exciting. i cant wait to read aboit the reactions of other people!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that your back, and I'm glad that you liked the way it's being written so far. Thanks for the review! Report Review
the story is definitely keeping me interested. I love how you can write kingley shackalbolts lines so well. those really do seem like proper questions that would be asked. all i have to say is: WOW!Author's Response: Wow back at cha! Thanks for the review, and I hope that you keep reading and enjoying, and as always, reviewing! Report Review
Nice. I really like the drama between Draco and Hermione. You did an amazing job of showing Ron's emotions and feelings. Another excellent chapter!Author's Response: Thank you so much. I really tried with that, and I'm glad to know that I've succeeded. Thanks for the review! Report Review
hehe. YAYY!! I like the story!! You did a good job of describing Hermione's situation in Azkaban. I also liked how you explained the exposition of the trial. Also, good job with the emotions of the Wizengamot! It was just like the book!! Great job.Author's Response: Thank you! I don't know what else to say...! Report Review
really good!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so into the plot, that it may take me a while to write the chapters but they will be out, I swear it. I hope that you stick with the story and continue to enjoy it! Thanks for the review! Report Review
this is so good. I really like it. I just sorta can't feel sorry for Hermione. She really didn't have to lie to Ron. As you probably guessed, I'm very fond of Ron.Author's Response: Ugh, I'm not all that fond of Ron, I have to admit. Though to each his own, just not my cup of tea. I can't feel bad for her either, and I'm the one writing it! I think that may be bad, though I can't be sure.
I'm glad that you like it and I hope that you continue to read and review! Thank you so much for your review! Report Review
I'm kinda upset. Hermione is such a bitch, how could she do that to Ron?
Anyway, its pretty good.Author's Response: ...Shrugs. I'd do it... but that's cause I'm a lousy person, and Draco's just so damn sexy. Anyways, that was a bit off topic... I'm glad that you are enjoying it, I hope that you continue to read and review! Report Review
intereasting...Author's Response: I like to think so. Thanks for the review! Report Review
This is really good. I cant wait until the next chapter. I feel sorry for Hermione and Shacklebolt is just being cruel. I want to punch him in the face. ^__^Author's Response: Well, it is his job after all... I'm glad that you are enjoying it, and I hope that you continue to read and review! I find it a little hard to sympathize with Hermione after what she's done to the people around her, but at the same time you can't help but feel bad... I'm glad that you like it! Report Review
Awesome! I am very rivetted on this one. The flshbacks are a very nice touch, although the transitions are not as smooth as they coul dbe. Als o you said "he would avenge his fathers dead" Didn't you mean "death?"
Great job though... I can't wait for chapter three!Author's Response: Yeah, sorry about that mistake, must have missed it. I'm glad that you are enjoying it though! I will definitely try to work on the tranisitions, thanks for letting me know! Report Review
This story is awesome. Keep updating! Author's Response: Thank you! I will definitely keep updating! Report Review
Wow really good start.
Looks like a really good story.
tho of course never be same will be hard to top.Author's Response: yeah, i feel like I wont be able to out-do myself on that one, but it can't hurt to try eh? I hope that you continue to read! Report Review
Interesting start and well writen.
But I have to say I really hate you!! Just today I had an idea for a story in which Hermione is accused of Draco's murder and now you've beaten me to it. Ah well, such is life!Author's Response: Thank you. Sorry about the whole connecting minds with the same ideas. I'm really excited about this though, I hope that you continue to read and reveiw :) sorry about the whole same idea thing. Report Review
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