I don't know much about this, but it really makes for a lovely little story. It just shows how absolute the love he feels for her is. I enjoyed your description, I love it when an author falls into one of those moods. It just seems to produce something abstract, even if it's just changing the everyday words for a mood or a process.
It was nice that she said she was a child of both. It's like she's able to let the sun "steal her glory," and then let the night glorify her. Brings her down to earth, if you will. And it's good that he perfers the moon, it enhances the story, his infatuation.
I'm beginning to wonder if I'm making sense. I enjoyed this little story, though, and I'm hoping to see more from you soon! :)
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um.that sorta confused me.who was it about? I liked it.but i didn't understand it.lol Report Review
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