hey that was a great stry its nice 2 c sumthing like that after it says lily was always in luv with him thats really good keep it up! NEway... thx 4 da stry

Author's Response: thanks! i dont know if i'll continue this one, just because well i started it when i was feeling a certain way a while ago, but i kind of got over it, so i guess there isn't much holding me to that story anymore... i don't know. we'll see.

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I think it was great, but I would love it if you updated! As I always say, just keep writing. Make sure you like your stories, but remember that it's just text. Just something you've typed on the computer. The real story is in your head, and it can be changed any time you want. So don't stress too much about making everything perfect. If you reread it after it's on the site, just jump in and make a quick change. Don't be too hard on yourself.

Okay, I sound like a mentor, I'll stop. But anyway, I loved it! I always enjoy tutoring things like this. Working in close quarters and everything. Great job!

Oh, I have a new story up, BTW. I thought I'd let you know! :)

Keep writing!

Author's Response: yea, i know, i have it when people stop writing something, but i wanted to do the others first, then i kept getting sick in between. like 4 times in the past 3 months, so i have a lot of school to catch up on, and then i'll write some more of this. my friend sort of read the beginning to the 2nd chapter then stole it... =) so i'll have to get that from her too... but thanks for being my mentor!

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good beginning! i hope u keep up with this story. also good ending for 'starlight and sweetdreams'!

Author's Response: thank you! my friend and I are starting this, and I think she'll keep me on my toes with this one! I'm glad you liked it, and really glad you liked my other ending! (I was really excited about that one...) =)

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