Fair start but your grammar could use some work

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What did they fight about? Are we going to find out?

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Lol! It was funny I loved it! Keep gonig!!!

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I loved this chapter. The circle pf friend and the talking bana! It rea;llly made me laugh out loud and my parents looked at me weird. Well update soon!

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Awww how cute

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I KNEW IT WAS GINNY lol

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Ha,Ha very funny! Good chappie nice little folow up (I spelt that wrong) Brain Block

Author's Response: lol thankx so much

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it was really good, and I won't be to quick to judge, but sometimes you were using present tense and sometimes past tense, so it jumped around a lot. Also, their stories were practically the same, and you avoided major detail. It is a good thought, but, hopefully as I read, it will become more concrete. Thats ok though, a first chapter can be hard to start something off.

Author's Response: Well I appreciate your contsrutive critism and i will keep that in mind for later chapters happy reading

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That was good! Keep going!

Author's Response: Thanx! I will don't worry!

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ha, Ron and Bananas,
that was a good
chapter but i
wish it was MORE!!!

10/10
Update soon!! Please

Author's Response: Lol yeah i know! I'm sorry it was so short but i wasn't sure how else to end it, i promise next chapter will be longer, and the next chap is like all romance lots of H/G, R/h, S/P, and L/D in there

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A banana? lmao. and it still seems they have a little steam built up, lmao. i mean the day after then make up arguments start again, i guess this is going to take a little time before it stops 100% isn't it. but they are making progress at least.

Author's Response: Lol yeah i couldn't think of anything besiides i thought it would be funny. Yes they didn't fully forgive each other, but i mean think about this logically they've hated each other for three years, it takes some time to heel the wounds and that was what i was trying to get across

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yay they're all friends again.

Author's Response: lol yeah! i wasn't sure who everyone would react to that but you all like the fact they are friends again, so that's good!

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wow!!I loved that chapter, it's so real.When I read it I started to think of the movie mean girls...when they start lieing and saying a bunch of stuff. Is there going to be another chapter?

Author's Response: Lol yeah i was kind of inspired by that movie for this chapter. Yes there will be tons more chapters this is just the begining!!

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That was good! Keep going!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!!!!! I will update either tonight or tomorrow!

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Awesome!

Author's Response: Thanx! I was really nervous about this chapter but i'm glad you all liked it

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Aww, there firends again. Yeah,
you finally updated. I still loved
the chapter.
10/10

Author's Response: Lol don't worry, there is plenty more drama to come, think about it this way... they couldn't stand being in the same romm with each other... how the hell are they gonna be friends? Lol don't worry TONS more drama and bitching as the girls learn the value of friendship!!!!!

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PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!
I have to read more of this story, you are
making me go crazy!!!. Please update soon.
I want to know why Hermione and Ginny
arent friends anymore and why Hermione
havent talked to Harry and Ron in a while.
The reason why i commenting on teh first
chapter was becasue i already wrote one
for the last chapter and they said that
you can only post one per chapter. So
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update. Me and
everyone has been waiting for like a
month or more ( it seems that way). By
the way, your story is AWESOME, again,
please Update. I wont say it no more.
I'll be planning on reading it SOON!!.
10/10
(sorry for long message)

Cal5114

Author's Response: I apolagize for the long wait. I am SO sorry too sorry for words. Se the chapter would have been updated, however it got rejected cause i had too big of a banner so now i have to wait a week. Well actully that was a week ago so tomorrow hopefully! I am truly sorry. I want to thank all my readers for sticking with me, especially now! I feel awful that you've had to wait this long, but plz be patient with me.Thank you everyone!

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Pretty good, though alot of parts need slowing down. But otherwise, the plot idea is original, for once Hermione and Ginny aren't the bestest friends in the whole wide world, which gets tiring after a while, so this was a bit of a relief.

I'm looking forward to the next update. :)

Author's Response: Thanks I was trying to make it original oh and thank you very much for the constructive critisism

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ha! too funny, cant wait for the next chapter! Ron and Harry make me laugh! I hope were going to find out why they hate each other soon!

Author's Response: Lol yeah I wanted to make Harry and Ron a little humorous in my story

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I love this story cant wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: Thanx! I'm trying to update

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So far no romance/pairing of Harry & Ginny or Ron & Hermoine. We'll wait and see.

Author's Response: Yes you will see, very soon actually...

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omg whyy whyy do u leave me hanging like this??? i'm going to go phsyco please please please update soon please

Author's Response: I'm sorry! I am trying to get it updated, but i added chapter images so i have to now wait for those to get on arg... it's very annoying!

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how cruel. i really like this story. keep it coming? (i ask as sweetly as possible)

Author's Response: I will i promise

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:))) this was so funny!!! keep writing.

Author's Response: Thanx!

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This series is so funny keep going!

Author's Response: aww thanks so much

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