I just realized all the typos in my review of this story (above) hehe. I meant to say that ur fic is really good, really really good, not food, hehe. ANyway, it is really great I hope u will add a chapter SOON!! :)
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please r/r/r all my stories. no one *starts crying* is! Report Review
It sounds good! cant wait!! Report Review
That sounds cool. Report Review
muahahhahahahahhahahahah. Report Review
sry. (had to get that out of my system) heheheheheh. it sounds good tho Report Review
r/r/r all my stories please! no one *sniff* is! Report Review
The story has an interesting theme, and i would like to know more. I thought Harry sounded distant when he said we have class after she told them her father did that to her. well good luck with the story.
Great idea, nice plot, but I\'d love for you to add more detail. (What does she look like, more descriptive with the lines, ect.). Some people would prefer it the way it is...that\'s just me, lol. Keep writing. :) Report Review
Really cool idea!! You should put soem emotion into the characters, I think the trio would be taken back by her telling her father had hurt her. Otherwise, really food :) I can\'t wait to read more, more, more.
By the way, could u read my fic, Love and Sorrow? Please.
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