{reviewid: 2322683, reviewer: '%3A%2F'}
29th March 2010:
I think it could have been a LOT better. The other chapters were really good so please keep writing. The story it self is very intresting but your grammer and spelling is killing me! If you would improve that the quality of what you write would be higher. I've really enjoyed the story so Please continue! Good luck! :D
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{reviewid: 2322674, reviewer: 'Hopefully%20constructive%20%3A%29'}
29th March 2010:
I thought that was good! I really like your style, I just saw a few grammer errors (threw and through). I hope you keep writing :)
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{reviewid: 2273099, reviewer: 'HermiiLienii'}
24th December 2009:
LOVE IT!!! Just one tiny little thing : Then Mr. Weasley kissed Hermione on the cheek and gave ron another handshake.
Shouldn't be Mr Granger? Just a remark.
Good luck with writing!
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{reviewid: 1064835, reviewer: 'mysticalfantasies07741'}
16th July 2006:
im confused?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
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{reviewid: 754686, reviewer: 'nini'}
1st November 2005:
my god! I laugh non stop, It's wonderfull!! xxx
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{reviewid: 564558, reviewer: 'cellphonejunky'}
26th June 2005:
This chapter was goood keep going why do you use the dashes i don't under stand oh well.
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{reviewid: 512700, reviewer: 'CourtneyFaith'}
23rd May 2005:
~Cute Chapter.~
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{reviewid: 507536, reviewer: 'k.%20mcelroy'}
19th May 2005:
I think this is an interesting point of view, but type a little more carefully, many errors.
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{reviewid: 152380, reviewer: 'HUGE%20Ron%26Hermione%20fan'}
14th May 2004:
UUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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{reviewid: 152378, reviewer: 'HUGE%20Ron%26Hermione%20fan'}
14th May 2004:
It does NOT suck! Okay, maybe a little. . . I just haf'ta know what's gonna happen!
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{reviewid: 152244, reviewer: 'HUGE%20Ron%26Hermione%20fan'}
14th May 2004:
Please don't have Harry and Hermione!!!
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{reviewid: 152239, reviewer: 'HUGE%20Ron%26Hermione%20fan'}
14th May 2004:
Ooooh! cute, cute, cute!!! have 'em get together!!
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{reviewid: 152232, reviewer: 'HUGE%20Ron%26Hermione%20fan'}
14th May 2004:
Hahahahahahahahahahahaahahahahahahah!!!!! That was CUTE!!!
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{reviewid: 152227, reviewer: 'HUGE%20Ron%26Hermione%20fan'}
14th May 2004:
That was so cute! Sometimes Ginny's such a pain!
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{reviewid: 152224, reviewer: 'HUGE%20Ron%26Hermione%20fan'}
14th May 2004:
Um. . . why is hermione's letter red (like hearts)?
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{reviewid: 127559, reviewer: 'kichan'}
5th April 2004:
i really like this story! write more!
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{reviewid: 111832, reviewer: 'apotterfan'}
2nd March 2004:
an awesome fanfic, update soon
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{reviewid: 82036, reviewer: 'cow'}
28th November 2003:
mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow
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{reviewid: 61172, reviewer: 'Bubu'}
12th August 2003:
u do it well mate...the characters r soo real...esp. ron it\'s like he\'s straight out fr the book! ^^ keep it going mate... we all wanna know wat\'s gonna happen next...sumthing romantic? it better be~ ; P keep up the good work!
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{reviewid: 54760, reviewer: 'MuggleLover'}
4th August 2003:
aww poor ron! he is sometimes an idiot tho... please write more..i wonder wat he\'ll do?
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{reviewid: 44475, reviewer: 'Shell'}
23rd July 2003:
That was very good
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{reviewid: 53848, reviewer: 'Alysha'}
23rd July 2003:
[-;-]Bonjour[-;-]
Hey! I just wanted to say that I like your plot so far! ;D You could work on the punctuation and wording, but other than that I think you\'re doing okay. I can\'t wait to read more chapters! Please email me @ BishaKisha@yahoo.com when you\'ve updated this story - Thanks!
[-;-]<3 Alysha[-;-]
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{reviewid: 54344, reviewer: 'MuggleLover'}
23rd July 2003:
more pweez! i luv this! umm but can u make ron a little less stalkerish
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{reviewid: 54349, reviewer: 'Noting'}
23rd July 2003:
Whats stalkerish?
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{reviewid: 54458, reviewer: 'MioneWeasley'}
23rd July 2003:
AHHHHHHH!!!! Keep writing!!!!! PLEASE!!! It\'s a really good story and I need to see it all work out in the end!!!! Amazing story, please write more!!!
MioneWeasley
ps Could u review my stor(ies), please
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