Fantastic, i loved it. Well done, i have favourited the story. :-)

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omg so sad! :( poor sirius! :( but great story! 10/10

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ah that was so sad! :( urgh i hate sadness... 8/10

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omg emma! ah yay! whoohoo!

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ahahaha i have seen the hannah montana achey-jackey heart thing. he is a creep. anyway i was laughing so much about the makeup thing i was crying! GOD Sirius and James are dumb. An eye lash curler. Stupid stupid boys. 10/10! ahahahahaha

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oh god i hope poor emma is ok. Half for Sirius and Lily's sakes but mainly for Sirius' sake. Poor poor emma and poor sirius. ick i hope she doesn't die.9/10

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ahahahahahahahahahaha that was hilarious! sucked in snape! ahahahahahaha 10/10!!

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OH GOD I HOPE THEY KISSED! 10/10

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Loved it. Felt a little sorry for Snape but he deserved it! He lied and did a completely unfair fight. That coward! 10/10

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I love James. Seriously. Why can't lily just love him automatically?

Author's Response: Ha, we'd have nothing to write about.

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Good chapter! :) I can't wait to read the next one!

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GOD stop killing off every character, this is the second time I cried while reading this(I think 2nd maybe 3 times)
:'(

At least you can tell it's a good story if it can bring out emotions

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it was reallyy!! reallyy!! GREAT! no kidding im in tears writing this [no kidding im bawling here!] it was so emotional, i wish JK kept them alive

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The story is so sad.i cried at the end.Poor Sirius nobody believed him):

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Its sad to think that this was how it all ended... it kind of makes me too depressed to continue with my silly 'how they got together' stories, but at the same time want to go running back to them for comfort haha. This was a truly good piece, one I had trouble putting down. This is not a knock to your writing ability, but it was more a fact of the story line that interlaced so many people that kept me coming back for more, and I'm left with the feeling that this was
More fact than fiction... Haha well done well done well done!

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This was a fantastic story. It had a terribly sad ending, but you weren't given much choice in that now were you? lol. Great story, absolutely amazing. So sad it's over. 1million/10!

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Such a good story. The ending is so sad. But sometimes a good story has to end in sadness. This is one of them.

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"Remus, come on…Wait! I know what the problem is. You and Lana are too similar…always studying and acting all noble. When you do get a girl she’ll be your wild side. You know, with neon hair or something. Ha-ha. And Sirius, well, he’s too cocky to ever really settle down. I mean, imagine if he were forced into a jail cell or something…he’d explode from the boredom and not having the ability to move" LOL! i was laughing so hard i had to cover my mouth so my dad didnt think I was crazy...¬ u ¬ lol. Which then caused my ears to pop since i couldn't breathe.which is a compliment btw cause i don't normally get emotional during stories. :) great job

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So here we are. At the inevitable end.

The story of James and Lily strikes me more than any other in the entire Harry Potter world. It has such depth, and I can hardly believe it. Or maybe we've created the depth, expanded it so far that JK Rowling could never reclaim it. Either way, it is their story that haunts me.

I'm picky about James and Lily stories. They're typically over-cliched, ridiculous, and lacking stylistically.

I finished yours, which is an incredible sign. If I don't like it, I stop reading. I think I only had a few negative comments, and I can't recall anything I truly disliked.

Your voice is powerful. Okay, yes, there were some little errors, but there always will be. Sometimes, I could feel the teenage view of life dripping through, but our experiences shape our writing.

It was an incredible story. You have a disclaimer on the summary. You said this story is not a representation of your present work. With how touching this was, I cannot wait to read more.

You truly have a gift, and I hope you know that. I hope you use it every day, to astound people, to show people what life is really like. Because your words are entrancing, and it would be a waste if you stopped writing. You would leave the world missing something.

Bravo to you, a hundred times again.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for all these wonderful reviews. It's interesting because while I was reading them I actually went back to read a few of the chapters because I couldn't remember what I had done. Man - in case you don't know - going back to read old work is almost as odd as it gets because you're getting a glimpse into how your mind worked back then. Haha, surreal. As far as the disclaimer in the summary - I'm glad you liked Once Again, but looking back, I have mixed feelings about it. If I were to do it over I think I would have taken out a bunch of that filler garbage and developed the characters a little more realistically. I don't think I incorporated the idea of grief very well. There were a lot of deaths and many were just skimmed over for time and space purposes. But that's all in the past. =] I'm learning.

Your reviews have been nice. Brief and to the point - I appreciate that. As for you saying I have a gift - man, that always makes me smile. Personally, I think I still need a lot of practice, but I really, really, thank you for letting me know that you think I have some potential. Honestly, that means a lot.

I read in your previous review that you are also writing a novel. Well, from one sometimes-writer to another, I wish you the best of luck with your endeavors and I hope it all turns out well for you.

Thanks again for reading and responding to this story. =]



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Killing your main character is hard. Twice as much for two, even if it was already pre-destined and you can't change it. I'm writing a novel, which I will publish someday hopefully soon, where the main male protagonist dies, and I promise you, it's the hardest thing I've ever done.

Killing James and Lily really, really sucks, too. I can't stand it, either, even though JKR killed them first so we have to as well.

Bravo to you.

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Oh, dear. There's all the OCs. Time to start killing the canon characters...

Bravo to you.

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Congratulations on life, Harry m'boy. Sorry to say, your life is mostly going to be really hard.

Bravo to you.

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Stupid Peter Pettigrew. I'd kill him myself if I had the chance.

Bravo to you.

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I wouldn't let James tell anyone where babies come from.

Bravo to you.

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Wow. Oh, wow.

Bravo to you.

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