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Review #1, by Ruby Prologue

2nd October 2011:
I liked it immensely. It was really well written and I look forward to reading more, but just for future reference.. Nymphadora (Tonks) died in Deathly Hallows. As you have set this scene after the death of Voldemort - I suggest you turn her into a new character, as I noted you didn't actually use her name in the text. Make her a distant relative of Tonks or a Tonks admirer. Otherwise good :)

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