. So she just magically got better??? Sony get me wrong i was about to give ip on this story cuz it was so depressing but that doesn't seem likely at all. Furthermore she's quite a contradicting character. In the Previous chapter when she first meets Sirius she is a jerk to him then suddenly they are best friends and fall in love and on the night they both knew there were dementors in the forest he let her go back to the castle alone???)

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Omg this is so sad...

UGH, I always loved Sirius, and just seeing him unable to live his simple dream just tears my heart up :(

I wonder what you meant by 'Their story was just beginning'?

Interesting ;)

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well, for starters it was good narration...good grammar as well...but my problem with this would be...being kissed by a dementor would have been a big issue to hogwarts, why then didn't the headmaster show up? she should have been sent to st. mungo's...right??and the healer's explanation was...hmmm...not very sympathetic, i guess...

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Eh... "Because one of them was lying." Stupid demon voice!
... What?

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Ha ha ha... "For now at least." I imagine the voice of an evil demon or all powerful phantom sayiing that in a rough,demeaning tone of voice... What?

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Awww, um... Yay!!! I luv this story sooo much!

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Hi! I read this story again and I just can't wait to comment! It's so so so so so awesome! ... Yay! I read it before as Lost In Luna Fan Land... Yay! It's awesomer than before!

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Aw that was amazing :)

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That's so sad with Sirius.
I am confused about Corie's and Sirius' past, but as you said, you'll explain that in the next chapter.
Good chapter!!!

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Wow. thats so sad.
cant wait to read more!!

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oh my gosh! well that is sure to be a blow to Sirius! i really hope the don't break up! that would be sad!

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oh dear, a cliff hanger. ahh! im so glad there's another chapter so i can see what all the screams are about!

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this story is so good! the idea was so creative, i can't wait to see what else happens!

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oh my gosh!! did she wake up? is she better? ahh i can't wait to read the next chapter to find out!

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wait, how did he know that the dementor was around the Forbidden Forest? it's so sad that just when they got together, she got hurt.

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i really liked this chapter. i really liked how you got both perspectives of the people.

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this was a great chapter! and you idea for doing a past tense thing is a really good idea!

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that was really good! these whole trilogy looks absolutely amazing! i seriously can't wait to read the rest, but i won't be able to read much more for awhile, but i will try to review every chapter!

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I listened to this song called Vulnerble (Sp?) By Seconedhand Serened (Sp?) I remined me of this AMAZING story!

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Whoa, Intense, cool, insperational!!! (Sp?)

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Very interesting so far! Very different than most Sirius/OC marauder era stories [different in a good way :)]

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wow, this is going to be really interesting.

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it was good and it had to happen so it matched the other books

its sad but i liked it..

Author's Response: Thanks!!!!!!!!!!
Bethanie

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lol you're a drama queen

Author's Response: Yeahhzzzz i know =]
Thanks!!!!!!!!!!
Bethanie

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Yes, they have to enjoy it while it lasts. Although, I hope it lasts for a while.

Oh, and YES! She said yes! *does a happy dance and throws her arms around Corrie* I just hope they don't make me wear a dress. After-all, I will be at their wedding, if not exactly in person...

Author's Response: Thanks!!!!!!!!!!
Bethanie

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