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7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by i heart harry 2010

The Hogwarts Express

13th February 2007:

I love it! update soon!

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Review #2, by Athena Evans

Surprises

13th February 2007:

Wonderful story so far! It is nice to read stories on how Lily and James could have ended up together. Keep up the good work!

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Review #3, by mimesrppl2

The Hogwarts Express

1st February 2007:

I'm sorry! While reading the chapter I noticed some mistakes I must have not seen. I 'm really sorry!

I still like the story though. If that helps...

- prove you wrong

Author's Response: hahah its okay. honestly i dont think ppl will get offend by bad grammer.(or mabay they will?!) its prolly gonna be like 3 or 4 days till the next update cause i have soo much homework.

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Review #4, by hpOBSESSEDxo

The Hogwarts Express

1st February 2007:

ah! love it. hahaha
greta job! xoxo (call me)

Author's Response: thanks. i

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Review #5, by hpOBSESSEDxo

Surprises

30th January 2007:

ah! yay! its up! hahaha. great story. xoxo

Author's Response: i know right its finallllly up!
xoxo

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Review #6, by mimesrppl2

Surprises

29th January 2007:

I like the story so far, just update soon please!

Scince this is your first story I am going to say you don't have a beta. I could Beta for you, if you want. Just e-mail me at mimesrppleto@yahoo.com. Or if you have a user on the forums PM me. My user name their is prove you wrong.

Author's Response: hey thanks! and yeah i'll take you up on that. i am going to revise the second chapter then sent it to you soon.
-jb

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Review #7, by Mini Marauder

Surprises

29th January 2007:

Sounds good so far. You're a good writer. Keep it up! ;)

Author's Response: hey thanks!!

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