I love it! update soon! Report Review
Wonderful story so far! It is nice to read stories on how Lily and James could have ended up together. Keep up the good work! Report Review
I'm sorry! While reading the chapter I noticed some mistakes I must have not seen. I 'm really sorry!
I still like the story though. If that helps...
- prove you wrong
Author's Response: hahah its okay. honestly i dont think ppl will get offend by bad grammer.(or mabay they will?!) its prolly gonna be like 3 or 4 days till the next update cause i have soo much homework. Report Review
ah! love it. hahaha
greta job! xoxo (call me)Author's Response: thanks. i Report Review
ah! yay! its up! hahaha. great story. xoxoAuthor's Response: i know right its finallllly up!
xoxo Report Review
I like the story so far, just update soon please!
Scince this is your first story I am going to say you don't have a beta. I could Beta for you, if you want. Just e-mail me at firstname.lastname@example.org. Or if you have a user on the forums PM me. My user name their is prove you wrong.Author's Response: hey thanks! and yeah i'll take you up on that. i am going to revise the second chapter then sent it to you soon.
-jb Report Review
Sounds good so far. You're a good writer. Keep it up! ;)Author's Response: hey thanks!!
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