I found this while searching a random story, and to my luck I liked it! It's good to see L/J stories from Lily's point of view. Report Review
Perfect! I can honestly say that this is the best one-shot on the web. It is an examplary story that is completely flawless: Funny, accurate, amazing, skilled, romantic, but not sappy [I really do hate sappy] and all in all:
99,999,999/10 Report Review
ahahah. She's so silly, and completely mad for a certain Mr. James Potter ;] Adorable to boot, complete fluff and just... GAHCUTEMYGODADORABLESWEETNESSCUTIECUTE!! XD 10/10 Report Review
It's cute. :D
~The other Twin Report Review
that was really good, man. i luved it, i was just dying to see of she would look up, (don't ask why), i just wanted her to.
*SNAPEY13* Report Review
Oh, that was sooo cute. I also love your banner. Would you conciter making one for me? E-mail me at email@example.com. Report Review
he-he. Blushing! Very good! Keep up the great writing!
~Ash~Author's Response: thanks muchly Report Review
jamesypoo duznt talk! thats not fair! hes the awesumest! i luv my mr potter! back off evans, hes mine i teel u, MINE! well not really, but in my head im the 1 who helped him change 4 miss lily!!10/10Author's Response: you want him to talk??? huh... maybe... Report Review
Awe, perfectly fluffy...lover it!!!Author's Response: goshums! thnaks! Report Review
Beautifully written :) I loved itAuthor's Response: thanking you! Report Review
that was so good, but... then what happens?
lol. I love how Lily is so ridiculous. What a doll. You describe James' effect on her nicely. Well done. She's so insane or is that he was sitting across from her at some point, but left. Anyway, it's good. James' smile. That was real sweet.
I liked this lil story a lot. Great banner, btw.
Cheers.Author's Response: bom chica wah wah... (have you seen that ad? probably not so my joke is wasted huh?)
i thankyou for reading. and commenting on the banner. i like this banner!!! (am i allowed to say that?) Report Review
I loved it! It was written so well, and I could totally relate to the blush thing. Great job! And however did you come up with this story?Author's Response: i was just thinking about that feeling of someone watching you, you know when you try to pretend you havent noticed but feel soooo self consious??? that is the mad hot blush! Report Review
Thanks for this. I needed it today.Author's Response: no thankyou for reviewing! Report Review
Great one-shot! I loved it!Author's Response: thanks Report Review
Its totally awesome!! I honestly think that this is one of the best one-shots on the web. I would say more, but I have to go sign on and put this story on my favorites list.
~ Granger Author's Response: best? oh-wow!!! thanks!!! Report Review
lol...those dam blushes!!! i can completely relate!! haha lovely, kinda pointless, story but hilarious all the same! 10/10 for you!! ♥Author's Response: why thanking you! Report Review
That was so cute :) Short but sweet. I loved it! -AllisonAuthor's Response: thanking you! Report Review
i really like it!! its short but swet - maybe u can make a short sotry basd on this.Author's Response: i could... i mean i suppose so... but where would i go??? dont know. maybe. glad you liked though! Report Review
aw! So cute! Hehe.
for lily, I mean...
10/10, this is a really nice and cute and lovely oneshot :DAuthor's Response: lol... thanks Report Review
That was a really great story and I love the banner as well!Author's Response: why thankyou! Report Review
Absolutely...awesome(haha, yes..I said awesome, straight after absolutely). This is...I mean...It's so cute. I really love it, because, well, I don't know that cheesy is the right word (but we'll pretend it is..). Right. It's cheesy, but it's so honest, and perfectly described. You sit there, and you try and be normal, but every little movement feels so odd and stupid and..obvious...you feel as though every tiny thing you do will scream to the world how you feel.
You kind of got me right there, you know?
I sorta started twitching, becuase I could relate too Lily's...err...problem.
And being a red head doesn't help...we blush just thinking about blushing...
Right now, I might be blushing, I mean, it's entirely possible.
Another habit's rambling.
Maybe i should have just posted this as a story and sent you the link.
Gosh! What a thought.
I'm just joking.
Yay! It wasn't that funny!
-Olly-Author's Response: i like cheesy even if it isnt the word you wanted! i for one am a naturally nervous person and unwated attention is something that has always made me super nervous. i think everyone feels like this sometimes... well maybe not the attention loving lime light stealing sorta poeple, maybe not so much huh/
any way you ramble i babble. i am the QUEEN of babble.
okay byye!!! Report Review
lol, so cute. and surprising. love it. 10/10Author's Response: thanks Report Review
hahaha. REALLY cute story! I absolutely loved it! It was written very well!Author's Response: thanks! Report Review
awww, I really like this one! short, and all-be-it a tad... cheesy? i don't know, I couldn't think of another word... but I love that! lol, I felt left hanging at the end! But then again, you don't need much more explanation... anywho, great job, it's cute!Author's Response: cheesy? i like cheesy! i am cheesy!
thanks. Report Review
Cant wait for more!!Author's Response: maybe...
thanks. Report Review
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