you know what is funny. my birthday is on the tenth of december. i took the what house are you in quiz and is said ravenclaw and i am an artist.

Author's Response: Lol, that is very interesting ;D

:) It's always nice to see coincidences. And I'm hoping that you like the plot thus far *huggles* Btw, thank you for your review ^^

Lots of thanks,
Meli =]

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cool sketches. . .
great chapter!

Author's Response: Yay!

Why thank you. :)

~Meli♥

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I haven't read this story in a while but i like this newish chapter :)
I hope you can update soon, unless you have revision.
Welldone Meli :D
Estella
x

Author's Response: Thank you, dudette. :]

I'll make sure to update sooner or later -- although I'm still writing at the moment.

Don't worry, though. :) I'll post the next chapter as soon as I finish and revise.

Your writer,
~Meli♥

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Keep it up! Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Your Reader -
*~•|Lynn|•~*

Author's Response: Thank you, Lynn. :)

I'll update soon, I promise. ^_^

~Meli

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I'm for Sev! :D Continue, I wuv this story!

Author's Response: :D yay. :)

I will continue sooner or later...

~Meli
P/s: I'm happy that you love this story! But there's more for me to reach, I believe. ;]

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WHAT!? Sorry, but how can she just leave him like that?! :O

Author's Response: It happens. :|

Sorry if you felt bad about it. I'm still trying to let them get together some day... :]

~Meli

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Well i must say i like your story, i started to read it yesterday and now i want more :)
I like how at mostly every author's note you say 'only 2 chapters left' and look where it has ended you up 39 chapters XD Determination that!!
Congratulations on your exam grades :)
I hope to read more soon, welldone :D
Estella xx
(p.s. i love your work and wondered if you could check out mine would mean alot to me :D)

Author's Response: Thank you! It's been a while since I added on to it, and I will sooner or later (much, much more later, it seems *sigh*). lol, I know! I'm quite the "even chaptered" type of person, but so far this fic's getting longer than what I had planned at first. *giggles* :]

Thank you for your review, Estellaa, and yes, I will go and check your stuff out. :D

Your writer,
~Meli♥

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*sharp intake of breath* poor abi has to do this all over again. with the lies and the secrecy and the death eatering... 10/10! good job! UPDATE SOON!
-xoxo, rowenaravenclaw94

Author's Response: Indeed. And I will update as soon as I can. ^_^

Don't worry for Abi. Everything's going to be all right...

Your [happy, sweet, delighted] writer,
~Meli♥

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good job! 10/10! i can't wait for her to see the game and the death eater invasion... UPDATE SOON! i hope that sarafina and sirius will be reunited before he falls through the veil...
-xoxo, rowenaravenclaw94

Author's Response: Of course they will! (And Sirius is so... not... well, I have no idea just yet...!)

Thank you for reading and reviewing, rowenaravenclaw94!

~Meli♥

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good job! 10/10! i can't believe that remus didn't recognize sirius the dog earlier tho... update soon! i luv this story!
-xoxo, rowenaravenclaw94

Author's Response: We'll see about that mistake of mine later. ;] And yes, I'll be updating sooner than you think. As for the story... you better love it!

~Meli♥
P/s: The second chapter's finally up. :D

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The sudden change from Severus grandnig to the scene at the Shrieking Shack confused me for a moment. Its a weird transistion. But things are making sense now on where this is taking place compared to the books. Overall, good job

Luv,Lisa

Author's Response: Thank you, Alohomora. ^_^

I'm doing my best to stay aligned, but change a few facts around. ;]

~Meli♥
P/s: I'll be updating sooner than you think, dudette, I will. ^_^

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i love this chapter! love love love it! and i think sev and abi should get married! (though the whole sev angst thing is awesome and makes for a good read) and as for sarafina and sirius? i think you should write something that's all twisty and insane that makes you say "mua ha ha" and leaves the readers gasping for air from how much we're laughing!
more please!
(ps: those munchkins are SO CUTE!)

Author's Response: The munchkins? Do you mean Amy and Rei? lol. ^_^

Okay, the plot is sort of unsteady at the moment and it's trying to find a way to end; so yeah...

I'm glad that you think that this is great (and that you love it!!). :D

~Meli♥
P/s: We'll see about Sev and Abi. ^_^ Eventually, because only the future will tell...

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Aww poor Sev, he never does get to explain his side, does he? And just when things were going so well.

Author's Response: If you keep reading, you'll see that he eventually gets back with his love. ^_^ Don't worry about the explanation, it'll come around. :)

Thank you for leaving many reviews, Snapegirl, for I have missed your comments! (I'm acting hysterical, I guess it's because I haven't seen you leave reviews...!)

~Meli♥
P/s: Once again: thanks!!

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I think it was funny that Abi can't cook and her thoughts on Sev in the shower were hilarious! Oh I'd like to see Sev in a shower.

By the way I'm a TA now too! And I've added a new Maverick story called Saving Mrs. Norris, so you could read that when you've got a minute!

Author's Response: Mrs. Norris? I think that I've seen it, but I'm probably going to start reading it once I finish up on your new Sev and Arista one. :D

By the way, you should write your own book, girl! You've got tallent. ^_^

~Meli♥

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So that's how you worked in the part where he overheard the prophecy. Does Abi ever find out that Sev's a DE? See, I finally reviewed again!

Author's Response: Eventually. :D

I'm glad to see you back, dear friend. ^_^ Anyway, I owe you far too many reviews!

~Meli♥

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Wait, hold on, what?? FullmoontonightO? Wasn't that my idea that Sirius was raiding houses for food? Sorry, I kinda feel cheated at the moment
But still great

Author's Response: Sorry about that... I'll fix it! *blushes*

It's just that the old reviews of before are gone!!! I thought that it was FullmoontonightO. :(

Anyway, don't feel bad. I've changed it!

Your writer,
~Meli♥

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he told her? eek! good job! 10/10! update soon! the suspense is killing me! i wonder if sarafina will help him to freedom... i hope severus and abi stay together! they are my rock. :) even though i'd get really mad, i think it would be a good plot twist for the story if she were captured by voldie. you HAVE to update soon! i'm dying here! hehe...
-xoxo, rowenaravenclaw94

Author's Response: Don't worry, rowenaravenclaw94! I'll update soon, and we'll see about any plot twists. ;D

Thank you for reviewing, by the way. :] I feel happy now. XD Two reviews in one day... *grins slightly*

Anyway, I will update soon. You'll just have to wait a bit for the next chapter to be written up.

~Meli♥

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well definitely DON'T put Sarafina through that again, especially after that with Sirius, but i think it would be interesting to make Abi get captured...

like Voldi found out about Severus and thinks she is an unworthy distraction putting everyone through a frenzy to try and find her,

then maybe trying to persuade Sirius to join him saying its not too late and why fight fate and tradition further back than himself.

but you know .. just a though.. lol sorry i get carried away at times. and seeing how you never know when some reply's back.. so you can email me.

sammieoxox

@

hotmail

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Author's Response: I will make sure to e-mail you in the future, dear reviewer (and for being the first person to review. :]). Anyway, I'll see about Abi, Sirius, Severus, and Sarafina. ^_^ And you'll be surprised by what happens.

;)

~Meli♥
P/s: I'm going to eventually update, just so you know. :D

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ALL HAIL SNUFFLES! (as you can obviously see, i am very excited over this chapter.) I want to see the friendly get together so bad!!! update soon!

Author's Response: I will, sooner or later...! ^_^ Once I get the next chapter for "Forced" soon. (And that's going to take a while...)

Thanks for reviewing though (I'm very anxious to get these done so I can really end most of my fics with a happy ending...! *keeps hoping*)!

Your (frustrated, writing, and guided by a sleepy Muse) writer,
~Meli♥
P/s: I swear that I'm going to update soon!!! Just wait for it... wait for it!!!

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this totally got me all teary-eyed! poor both of them! finally together, and split at the glance of a disgusting branding! 10/10! good job! update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! (I was beginning to think that everyone stranded me...!)

I'll update as soon as I have a great wedding party planned for James and Lily. There needs to be action and there has to be a first time of attack from Voldemort. Of course, Severus would have told Voldemort what information he gathered...

OMG! A plot has just formed! -- Meaning that I will update today. :D

Your writer,
~Meli♥
P/s: Two more tests to go and I'm free for the summer. ;]

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it's so bittersweet! good job! 10/10! update soon! have you updated your dramione fic with them? i'll check...

Author's Response: dramoine fic? Please explain...

Anyway, thank you for your review, rowenaravenclaw94. ^_^ *bows* They have been really great to me so far. :D

Your writer,
~Meli♥

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good job! 10/10! i'm really fascinated with severus and abi's relationship! i can't wait to see how his death eater-ness ties into it later on!

Author's Response: True, true...

I'm still in planning, apparently... *sighs dreadfully but continues to write*

You'll see how that happens though. Thank you for your review, rowenaravenclaw94!

Your (busy, writing, and still sleepy) writer,
~Meli♥

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Yay they finally made up and I hope they do stay together! Great chapter, I like Heather, she's a riot!

Author's Response: True, true, but just keep hoping.

Heather churps to your review. ;D

Thank you for reviewing, Snapegirl, thanks!

Your fellow writer and reviewer,
~Meli♥

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Well, it looks like things are finally going along here! Surprise surprise!

And congrats on your art show Meli!

Author's Response: Thanks, thanks. ^_^ and *bows*

Well, not everything's going to be going nice and smoothly... but it will be going that way throughout this chapter and the next, if ever.

Thank you for reviewing, Snapegirl, thanks!

Your writer,
~Meli♥

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Yay I wa swondering when you were getting around to posting this one again! Looks like things are starting to heat up again between Abi and Sev. Ohh boy! Great job and I'll read some more tomorrow, I'm kinda beat right now! 10/10!

Author's Response: Yeah, I know. ^_^ But sometimes all's not good...

Not when Sev has the Dark Mark and all...

Your writer & reviewer,
~Meli♥
P/s: I might start reading again today, just so you know. ;D

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