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Review #1, by Heather Uh oh, James is angry!

11th December 2011:
Brilliant :) cannot wait for next chapter.

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Review #2, by hermyemma What did who do?

6th June 2007:
crazy and confusing!

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Review #3, by erised713 Uh oh, James is angry!

12th February 2007:
Good story. I'm dying to see where this goes. Lily seems kind of cold. I hope you're going to make her nicer. Please update soon. And maybe you could check out my story.

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Review #4, by erised713 What did who do?

12th February 2007:
Wow! Very emotionally charged! I feel so bad for James. By the way, Princess of Wales? That's creative. Just one bit of criticism though. Sometimes it's difficult to tell who's pov you're telling the story from. Maybe you could make that a bit clearer in future chappies.

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Review #5, by Silver Rose Petals Uh oh, James is angry!

10th February 2007:
wow it's so sad, poor James. I want to read more though. Pretty please?

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Review #6, by obsessive Uh oh, James is angry!

9th February 2007:
I love it. Poor Lily. Is James even going to believe her when she tells him she's pregnant. This is going to get messy.

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Review #7, by wvb Uh oh, James is angry!

6th February 2007:
its an interesting plot, but the character jumps are too fast and not at all clear - even just saying the character's names at the top of each section could help. Also perhaps you could have developed the characters a little more and fleshed out the first chappie - making the characters more lifelike and making the actual story easier to read...
its a decent story though... good luck with it

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comments! Maybe I will put their names in. But I might not get to it very soon.

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Review #8, by seeker4u Uh oh, James is angry!

5th February 2007:
its kind of a quiet chapter but i like it!

Author's Response: Thanks. The next chapter will be more lively. I think...

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Review #9, by seeker4u What did who do?

5th February 2007:
it is so cool!! ;}}

Author's Response: Thank you! I was hoping you liked it.

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Review #10, by lisa Uh oh, James is angry!

5th February 2007:
i really like this story! is there like a catch? or a real reason why Lily did it? please keep updating! very very good story!

Author's Response: Thank you! And there'[s definitely a catch...

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Review #11, by 'Mione What did who do?

30th January 2007:
Pretty good plot idea. Just the fact that you keep changing the point of view makes it VERy confusing. I actually didn't realize that it seemed like you didn't like Lily, cause I couldn't understand who was talking half the time.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm sorry you found it so confusing, it all makes sense to me ;)

Next chapter is the same so... sorry...


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Review #12, by Zazuli What did who do?

30th January 2007:
LILY SUCKS! NOO! How could she do that to James, that little cow! James is suicidal. D: I am actually thinking about writing a story about James being suicidal. That'd be cool. The Avada Kedavra bit was great too, thank god for Sirius!

You should feed Lily to some man eating sharks! Heehee. Tip: Don't malke everything all right too soon, depressed state matters are more interesting to read! Ciao!

And update soon!

~Zazuli

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! And don't worry, there's lots of depression coming next!

P.S. Don't you just love Sirius?


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