Reading Reviews for Lovely Hearts
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Review #1, by Lostmyheart morning pranks and surprises

10th May 2014:
Hi there :)

Saw that you were online, so I thought I'd take a look at your creations!
I do love Dramione stories, so this was a story that I'd enjoy to read, if you had several chapters of it :) The first chapter seem a little hasty and don't have a lot of details. Which isn't necessarily a bad thing.
Hermione do seem very OOC, the fact that she forgot about Hogwarts may have been too out of character. But you seem to have a great start :)
If you still want a beta, you can find one at the forums, where there are a bunch of helpful people. They'd be mor than happy to beta read for you :)

- Lostmyheart

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Review #2, by magicmuggle01 morning pranks and surprises

11th October 2011:
A nice humourous start to your first chapter. Loved the pulling out the bed prank and forgetting the bed was not there and sitting on the floor again bit. You have a knack for the humour.
An excellant start to your story and I hope you update very soon in the near future. 10/10 and adding to favs.
By the way, if you go to dark arts on the right of the page they'll sort out a banner for you.

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