great premise, brilliant really. just so, sad. depressing. emotional, and it's not a bad thing, it means your writting is great Report Review
Ohhh, I was so excited when I saw you had a new story up! Sorry I didn't get here before.
That was just heartbreaking. Beautiful, but heartbreaking. For Ginny and Harry to give all that up...just heartbreaking, even though it's necessary. It's even more heartbreaking when you think about the events in "Stranger" and how they did recognize they once had something, but couldn't be together. This is one of the saddest pieces you've given us-in a good way, of course.
Everything that happened in here is no necessary. I love Ron and Hermione's conversation, Ron's anger, and Hermione's sad, logic, and I love Ginny's evaluations at Harry and her last night together (it sounds weird, but it's true). I really love it. It just pains me that Voldemort could be so-insensitive and cruel. He just really doesn't get it, does he? It's also cool how you put all of the "Garden of Eden" things is here. This is seriously one of my favorites of your stories. It's really wonderful.
10/10...my new story is in validation...Author's Response: So good to hear from you!! I was getting a little worried about this story as I re-read it after posting. It really is unlike the other stories I have written.
It is good to hear from a trusted reviewer and friend and get some postive feedback! Can't wait read your story. Thanks for always being ther for me!! Report Review
once again, another masterpiece.
do you have a myspace?Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I love hearing from my friends!! Sorry it took me son long to reply things have been a little crazy!
I don't have a myspace, I can only allow myself one internet indulgance or I would never get anything done!! Report Review
Thats so sad. i'm nearly crying, wow that was so cool, i cannot belive voldie would go that far as to wreck harry's life even after death. thats so cruel!! thats beyond cuel you would think harry deserved at least a smigdet of happyness. any way better stop now with my going on's. cool story dude :-D Author's Response: Thanks!! This is one of my rare sad stories, they always seem to be about Harry and Ginny. Thanks for the read, and I agree about the happiness!! Report Review
WoW. I don't want it to end. Its so sad. But some how emensly satisfing, like you knew it had to happen. But really sad one in the same.Author's Response: Thanks!! I think it can be sad and happy at the same time, like so many aspects of real life. Report Review
that was amazing so sad and romanticAuthor's Response: Yes it was wasn't yet. Thanks for reading and reviewing!! You should read the original story Stranger. Report Review
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