what is 'her' name? why didnt you mention seamus's name at all? i love the story Report Review
Wow. That was really good. And really original ... I've never read a fic like that. Very good idea, and nicely written.Author's Response: It's definitely differen't, isn't it! I'm very touched by your review, actually, because it's such a weird fic that I'm ecstatic whenever someone says they enjoyed it. Thank you so much for reviewing! Report Review
well... its weird allright, but i think this a nice piece of art!
this is such a beautiful description of feelings and emotions, such a realistic account on how one might think in the ever dulling world in the war of HP versus Lord V.!
Even the slash thingy is so realistic, one might actually be dragged to these kind of feelings (even though you're straight) just because all of wizarding world's hope lies within HP!
really... i'm speechless, though i've attempted to describe why it is that i like this one-shot so much.
thank you for writing this!
~SylvertwystAuthor's Response: Wow, thank you! This fic is rapidly becoming a favourite with me, so every review makes me smile so much. I think you understood this story perfectly, and that's really all I can say to this lovely review. Thanks for letting me know what you think, and I'm ever so glad you enjoyed it. :) Report Review
wow. this is so insanely cool!!! who is the woman though?Author's Response: When I wrote the woman in, I was still planning to keep the characters totally anonymous so I never consciously had someone in mind. Having said that, my mind seems to be saying Parvati. *shrugs* I guess she can be whoever the reader wants! Thanks a lot for reviewing and I'm really glad you liked it! Report Review
I have never read a slash before, but I really, really loved this! You wrote it so well and described just about every feeling that you possibly could. I loved the way you chose him to become a ghost and the way that Harry no longer could look at ghosts. I really understand why he wouldn't want to either, because it reminds him of death which he had seen plenty of.
Also I loved the last two sentences, they were perfect to finish the story. well done :)Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I'm really glad that you enjoyed your first slash. This didn't actually start out being a specific character, but somehow it morphed into Seamus whilst I was writing it. I wasn't even planning to bring Harry into it at all, it was just going to be the transition into a ghost! So basically, it's nothing like how I planned! I'm really glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing! Report Review
A story well told! Congratulations! Writing something this 'dark'... It's something I wish I could do...Author's Response: Thank you! I honestly think this fic is really odd, so I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
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