Reading Reviews for Persephone
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Review #1, by AussieAnatomy627 One-shot

26th December 2009:
"Maybe he had been stalking her." Haha

That was beautifully written! I loved it! Great job!

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Review #2, by Erilin_chan One-shot

18th September 2009:
wow, I love that whole story. very calming, serene and romantic.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I had a great time writing it and I love seeing reviews like this one

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Review #3, by GingerIsSoHot One-shot

13th November 2008:
OMG! That was amazing!! Fantabulous! Magnificant!!
Maybe you could write another one like this and make the smoking HOT Draco Malfoy, like make him a bad-good person, if you know what I mean. Make him all mysterious and sexy, then make him & the gorgeous Hermione like have a really heavy snogging session! But make Draco corner first, so shes trapped, then heavy make-out session!

Author's Response: You know I'm down with that until the hot snogging, because I can't really handle Draco hooking up with anyone...that isn't Harry/Blaise/Theodore, you know?? Hah! But I'm very happy that you enjoyed the story...though I'm sorry it didn't have Ron (I take it from your penname that you like him lots).

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Review #4, by Samantha One-shot

1st October 2008:
i love this story and how you made them work together. i love this pairing together, but it's not believable when they get together either through head duties or hermione's dramatic makeover. i love greek mythologie and i never payed much attention to this story. i'm happy with the ending, you stopped it just at the right time, because you left the rest to the imagination. i love your stories, they're amazing. lol i'm way too lazy to log in to review this, but yeah 10/10 !

Author's Response: Hahahaha thank you so much!! Yeah I wanted to make it seem really real so I put the two characters in a place where they'd both reflected on the war and understood each other. Yes, I love mythology as well, I'm in a Myth and Bible course right now and it's super fun. Thank you SO SO much for your review!!

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Review #5, by UnicornTale One-shot

11th April 2008:
That was amazing!
Well written and magical.
I love it.

Author's Response: Aww, thank you. You know, I haven't gotten a review for this story in awhile, I almost forgot it existed! But it's good to hear that people are still liking it ;-)

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Review #6, by LoveBroad4ever One-shot

6th September 2007:
simply amazing!


Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much for your flattering use of improper fractions!!! ;-)

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Review #7, by MidwinterMasque One-shot

20th July 2007:
That was beautiful. I can't believe that Draco could be that thoughtful and kind and amazing, but you wrote it so naturally. The Deathly Hallows comes out tomorrow morning, and I am trying to read all the fan fictions I can before my mindset is changed forever. It's quite sad actually...

*sighs and wanders away dispiritedly*

Author's Response: Awwww....well we can only hope our favorite ships survive. Thank you for taking a break from your fan fiction reading to leave such a nice review!

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Review #8, by RainyDay419 One-shot

29th April 2007:
I LOVE IT! your such an amazingly talented writer. :)

Author's Response: Awww thank you!!

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Review #9, by artzyarministani One-shot

3rd April 2007:
oooh that was good!

Author's Response: Thankya!!

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Review #10, by Aubrie Wright One-shot

15th March 2007:
that was beautiful
that is my favorite one-shot ever!
Great Job!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!!

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Review #11, by hebu One-shot

3rd March 2007:
my favorite part: "That patch of blond hair half of Hogwarts would die for in his younger days sat solemnly and smoothly, as if every thin strand was combed to perfection." haha i don't know why i like it so much, but i do! :)

Author's Response: That was the sentence I used to portray that Draco was still wildly sexy...I can't imagine a world without sexy Draco. Glad you liked it!!

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Review #12, by myztik One-shot

16th February 2007:
loved it! very well written. it made me cry... well, not really, but nearly. :) write more!

Author's Response: Haha thank you so much anyway!! I think that's all I'm going to do with this story, but I do have others if you care to take a look...this one's probably the best though haha.

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Review #13, by Entropy One-shot

15th February 2007:
This was really well done, and I think it's cool how you related it to the Greek myth. Since I've been very little I have been obsessed with Greek myths and have read every version I've been able to get my hands on. But anyways, I liked how this story took time to develop, unlike the stories where Hermione and Draco do a complete turn around in a space of ten minutes.

Author's Response: Haha, we have the Greek myth obsession in common! I've loved those timeless tales since fourth grade haha. I'm glad you thought that it didn't move too fast, as I always find that a small problem with Draco/Hermione stories and worked hard to make it real and canon.

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Review #14, by scarletheartedlioness One-shot

13th February 2007:
Wow. Just wow. I can't find any words that will cover what I think of this story. Just wow. You have talent, brilliant talent. Don't ever let anyone tell you otherwise. I loved this. It was excellent. I look forward to reading more of your work. 10/10.

Author's Response: Awwww oh my god thank you so much!! I'm so happy you liked my story...and you didn't have to give me all those compliments...*blush* Thanks so much, it's nice nice people like you that keep the stories coming out.

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Review #15, by VeniceLily One-shot

8th February 2007:
aww i love it! beautifully written, and i love how you made Draco. 10/10 from me!

Author's Response: Thank you, I tried to keep him both real and cute and fluffy at the same wasn't easy haha. Thanks so much for your review and rating!! :-)

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Review #16, by LOVERLY One-shot

7th February 2007:
ah! i loved this

Author's Response: Your review = I loved it. :-)

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Review #17, by Claire D'Loure One-shot

7th February 2007:
Awww, that was precious! I love that myth, it's my favourite actually. Thank you so much for making it into a Dramione fic. You should expand it and make it into a full-length story, that would be brilliant!

You're writing is beautiful; I love the way you put things, it's so eloquent!


Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad to see another myth fan who enjoyed this story. I wish I could make it full-length, excpet I just don't have that kind of patience! Haha, sorry about that and thanks so much for your review and encouragment.

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Review #18, by icefire_lioness One-shot

25th January 2007:
awww!!! that was so great! I love your writing - its't think of the word..but its awesome anyway!!! I have to read the story of persephone now (I know the story basically..but I would like to have a more detailed version in my head!) thankyou for giving us a sample of your wonderful wrting!!

Author's Response: Haha I'm glad I left you speechless in a manner. I also need to take a look at a more detailed version of Persephone. I write these fics with just the basics of the myth in mind, as I don't want to get weighed down by the details of the myth. But I do need to look at it now that I'm finished. Many thanks!!!

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Review #19, by Gypsy One-shot

25th January 2007:
That was adorable and I loved it. I hate cliche's too... Lol. 10 out of 10!

Author's Response: Hehehehe I'm glad you did! I hate clichés as well...that's why I added that in for Hermione. I especially hate clichés in fan fiction...ugh such a turn-off haha!

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Review #20, by al3x One-shot

24th January 2007:
OMFG! That was brilliant, seriously it was. I think the story behind it was absolutley amazing! I wish it had been longer but i spose one-shots are short for a reason. Omg i loved this story, just everything about it was perfect. I always hate it when people dont portray Draco as the way he is, which i knoo is hard as yu have to get him to like Hermione, but i think even though he was different in this, he was still Draco. Oh wow...I really was quite speechless, i sat staring at the review box for a bit because i couldn't think of anything to say. Wow...
Alex xx

Author's Response: Awwww wow this is such a great review, thanks so much Alex!! I've read a lot of Draco/Hermione fics and I also am a bit unhappy when Draco is portrayed wrong. It is definitely a challenge to put Draco and Hermione together but I'm glad you thought I succeeded! Thanks so much!!

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Review #21, by Heart Of Athens One-shot

22nd January 2007:
hehe...before i start my ranting i just want to say that im a dork. okay. a while ago i was very obsessed with greek mythology and when i read your summary i was like "Oh i have to read this". you really changed my perspective on Demeter's Lost Daughter. and i have to say...i love the new view of it.

Author's Response: Hehehe I've been on/off obsessed with Greek mythology for years, it's such good inspiration for fan fiction! I include twists in my Greek-myth-based fics because it's important to have some originality. I'm glad you enjoyed it, fellow Greek myth dork haha!

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Review #22, by crissybabe101 One-shot

22nd January 2007:
aw what a lovely story. i love it. could you do a sequel.please! please! please!

10/10 good work

Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked it, but I'm sorry to squash your request but I just can't really see a sequal for this story. Sorry, but thats for the 10/10 and great review!

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Review #23, by dracosgoddess123 One-shot

22nd January 2007:
aw! that was beautiful. i loved it. could you possibly write more!!! please! *begs* i really enjoyed it. it had a nice storyline to it and even tho i was slightly confused as to where harry ron where and everything the way you portrayed hermione and draco made up for it. wonderful job!

Author's Response: I'm so happy that you enjoyed it! Haha I don't intend to do much more with this story, but my other ones are on my fan fiction archive and I think that there's a link to it in my profile...if not, inform me and I'll get one up there. I'm sorry about the Harry and Ron thing, I just couldn't really find a good way to tie them in without breaking the whole mood of the story. Thanks, nonetheless!!

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Review #24, by xXsilent_tearsXx One-shot

22nd January 2007:
That was simply amazing. You had everyone so in character. And plus, I love the myth of Persephone and Hades. Your plot was so original and really well written. I hope to read more from you soon! If you ever would like me to make a banner for your story, you can just email me at and I'd be happy to make you one. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: I'm really happy to hear that you thought everything was IC, as OOC is always a big problem generally with Draco/Hermione fics and I tried to conquer it. I'm also a greek mythology fan hehe. And I intend to email you momentarily with a more formal banner request...thank you so much for the offer!!

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