yeah...nice cliffhanger to a very short st---chapter. post next chp. soon and i'll b loving you! (ur actually pretty okay at suspense and tenses)Author's Response: thanks, i'll be posting soon! Get well soon(if not already)! Report Review
yeah lol...great first fanfic.lol.kinda short for the first chaperter, no? w/e, no biggie...yeah just keep the spelling cool. yeah. um. yeah. its good, im just bored/tired/down w/ the flu and rather emotionless. Author's Response: thanks, sorry about the shortness. it will be much longer next time.. i didnt really check the spelling at first. and sorry about ur flu. Get Better Soon!! Report Review
OMG! a cliffie? ur killin me...nice work on the speling! Please update soon..its such a great story.Author's Response: you're too kind, and i did try on the spelling this time..haha i'll update as soon as possible! and thanks! Report Review
It great that you made harry and 'mione an iem so early on. However, Malfoy stills seems a bit nice...maybe if he were slightly more moody. Also the spelling is slightly wrong. But keep up the great work!! Update soon!Author's Response: thanks for the reveiw! Sorry about the spelling, I'm not always the best at that. The next chapter is being vallidated and will be out soon. Please continue to reveiw it helps! Report Review
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