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12 Reviews Found

Review #1, by icefire_lioness The Dementor's Kiss

2nd June 2008:
Umm...hm. Wow. Well, it was a little confusing, I must say. However, if it were to go on, maybe explain things in a little more detail (i.e. why the dementor was able to turn into Cho and why it wanted to get Harry) I reckon it could work out a bit better. Anyway, I think it was a good start, and seeing as you got full credit on it, congratulations! I must ask though; you said that it was also related to another story. What was it? Good job, keep it up! (And if you wanted to read and review any of my stories I definitely wouldn't mind that, lol!) Loves, icy.

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Review #2, by iloveseverus The Dementor's Kiss

18th October 2007:
that was confusing a wierd. i don't get it.

Author's Response: well it was supposed to be from two different books, did you read the series of unfortunate events???



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Review #3, by ihs The Dementor's Kiss

9th August 2007:
weird!

Author's Response: :P i know

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Review #4, by holly bergman The Dementor's Kiss

5th July 2007:
...that was unexpected.

(oh really, how observant of you holly...)

Well Dumbledore was being a bit of an idiot (what a stupid thing to say...) and everyone was rather OOC...except maybe Ron... and I'm pretty sure dementors can't transform into anything...

But you definitely get points for originality...and dispite the sheer weirdness I think I actually enjoyed it!

Author's Response: lolxz um...

thanks for redin and enjoyng it! ...lolxz

:)


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Review #5, by what? The Dementor's Kiss

4th March 2007:
hey, i like this thing. who knew you wrote so well?

Author's Response: lolxz thanks

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Review #6, by xxx weasley xxx The Dementor's Kiss

3rd March 2007:
i loved it. it was pretty good u should keep making these story's :)

fanfic fan

xxx weasley xxx

Author's Response: lolxz will do!!

thanks for the review!!!



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Review #7, by Princessinfinity The Dementor's Kiss

28th February 2007:
There was some very funny dialogue in this... Yule ball blow for you too...very funny.

Author's Response: lolxz thanks for reviewing!

i suck at making things funny, but i'm glad you thought it was so!



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Review #8, by Go Harry Potter The Dementor's Kiss

1st February 2007:
I really liked it . . a lot. It was really cool. Keep on writing!

Author's Response: oh thank you very much!

lolxz i will!


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Review #9, by Living In Dreams The Dementor's Kiss

23rd January 2007:
i actually found this to be a pretty good read. short and sweet but also it wasnt predictable which was good. i didnt see the whole cho dementor thing coming so well done. i hope it got you a good grade at school.

Author's Response: thanks!!

i got full credit on the assignment

when i read it i thought it was predictable..... probably cause i was the one..... who wrote it....lolxz

doesn't make sense... but whatever

thanks for your review!


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Review #10, by Hermione2005 The Dementor's Kiss

22nd January 2007:
Well i say a good start be more specific on things and try to focus more on krum and hermione if that was ur main P.OV. but i liek it keep up the good work =)

Author's Response: thanks for the advice

and thanks for the compliment!!

i'll keep putting up more stories!!!


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Review #11, by Devil's Secretary The Dementor's Kiss

22nd January 2007:
Wow! That was pretty cool. At first I was all like "Cedric wouldn't do that, he's nice!" and "Wow, Cho moved on pretty fast." but then it was a Dementor and I was like "Whoa!"

Author's Response: Awe! Thank you for giving it a good review, I really appreciate it!

I'm glad you like'd it!


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Review #12, by Bell The Dementor's Kiss

19th January 2007:
Criticism- that was one of the worst things I've ever read. Did you realy get graded on that?

Author's Response: lolxz yeah, i wasn't really trying to followthe tone or the flow of the story... i was just trying to get the project done...

actually i got full credit on the assignment....

but thanks for the review... i don't consider myself much of a writer anyways.

i just thought it'd be fun to see what other people thought about it.


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