Reading Reviews for Mesmerised
236 Reviews Found

Review #1, by august The Spectacular

16th April 2014:
Okay, I know you've abandoned this story years ago, but would you please finish it! It's just too good to not have a proper ending! I've re-read it sooo many times! And every time I hit this chapter, I die a little knowing that it stops here ( at the worst possible cliffhanger ever!)! So please update it soon :)

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Review #2, by Amber The Spectacular

30th December 2013:
Everytime I check this story and realise it hasen't updated I die a little inside.

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Review #3, by Tori_t The Spectacular

22nd October 2012:
I'm hooked!! Can't wait till the next update!! Please do it soon!! I can't wait till James and lily get together! :)

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Review #4, by your biggest fan ;) The Spectacular

19th August 2012:
I don't think you know how many times I've reread this story, hoping that it would be updated. The fact that it's been abandoned right there, THAT CLIFFHANGER.. Kills me.
Probably the best fanfiction I have ever read, I'm so sad that you quit..

Thank you anyway, for a great story.

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Review #5, by Hope's Mom The Spectacular

7th July 2012:
I just reread this lovely story - it's still amazing!

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Review #6, by sam The Spectacular

22nd June 2012:
i really love your story please update it, i know its been like three years but you should

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Review #7, by MARAUDERandDAUGHTER James

22nd October 2011:
Love, love, love, love, LOVE!!
my favourite character? Addy! Or Lily. The picture of the model is EXACTLY what I expected her to look like, but with a little more charm.
As for the story, well, what can I say! It's fantastic! :D

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Review #8, by Hope's Mom The Spectacular

13th October 2011:
I've just recently found your story in the archives. It's great! You have an entirely different take on Lily and James and their personalities. I like the OCs, too. I am sorry to see that you haven't updated in quite a while - you left it at such a cliffie, too. Thank you for sharing your story!

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Review #9, by Isla The Spectacular

9th September 2011:
Are you still planning on finishing this story? Please please do! It's such a lovely, fresh take on James/Lily, unlike any I've ever read. So un-cliched and quite well written. I'm dying for you to finish it. :)

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Review #10, by Paloms The Spectacular

13th July 2011:
This story just gets more and more intense as it goes on! Although I've wondered where you've disappeared to for the last year and a half. You're an excellent writer and this story proves that. I'm hoping that whatever has stopped you at the moment will go away for your sake!!! Thank you for making this wonderful story!

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Review #11, by Lovingpadfoot This Life Thing

5th July 2011:
Love it! Not much more I can say

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Review #12, by Lovingpadfoot On Hallow's Eve

5th July 2011:
I am in love with it. Can't wait to read more!

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Review #13, by Lovingpadfoot Reluctance relenting

5th July 2011:
Very well written. Sup rising personality for Lily. I never would have pegged her for shy but I like it!!!

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Review #14, by Lovingpadfoot Seeing the Unseen

5th July 2011:
Very well written!! The plot was good, an unexpected idea with Lily as a seeker, but hey Harry had to get his seeker skill somewhere. The only thing is you have some capitalization problems!

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Review #15, by one_crazy_cookie The Spectacular

22nd June 2011:
So, I can't help but notice its been a couple years since this has been updated. Annnd I really really really want to read more of it! I absolutely love the way you've done lily and James in this story, it's refreshingly different from all the other lily/James stories. Your writing is brilliant too, I must add. And to stop updating at such a cliff hanger! Aye carumba. So, what I'm trying to say, is I really really really hope this hasn't been abandoned, and I hope there will be another update! I love this story, its probably the best Lily/James story I've ever read. So please, please tell me you haven't abandoned it!!! And yes, I do like Nia and Sirius, but I always have:)

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Review #16, by LilyFlower_x The Spectacular

21st June 2011:
i know theres almost no hope anymore. BUT PLEASE COME BACK TO THIS STORY! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!

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Review #17, by Simply.Love The Spectacular

21st May 2011:
Read it again. Still cant believe you'll torture us like this bu leaving the story at such an important point. Please don't be so cruel on us. Update soon. Dying to read what happens next.

Always your fan

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Review #18, by Ryanne The Spectacular

12th February 2011:
Has this story been abandoned? (I can't tell when you're last update was) I hope not!! Please update soon!

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Review #19, by Reggie Three Old Dances

1st February 2011:
So I've just completely re-read the entire story.

And now I feel like crying. I forgot how absolutely spectacular it is. And I definitely forgot the HUMUNGOUS cliffie you left it at.

And it's been something like 2 years now. And I'm so happy and soo soo sad. This is SUCH AN AMAZING STORY!

You are absolutely remarkable and I will forever pray that one day you decide to continue Lily and James's story. You write it so flawlessly! Your characterizations are marvellous and I will forever miss them all! I have to stop now because 1) I actually am going to make myself cry and 2) I've run out of synonyms for amazing

Mesmerised will be my favourite fan-fiction and one of my favourite peices of writing forever.

I miss you :(

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Review #20, by christwithana Vin and Poppy

31st January 2011:
will you pleasepleasepleaseplease update soon?
please? :(

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Review #21, by angiedotdotla The Spectacular

19th January 2011:

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Review #22, by impatient The Spectacular

2nd November 2010:
dude, drop everything and UPDATE!! it's been forever.

it was as usual an AWESOME chapter, Lily realising she like James at the end? SQEEE :P



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Review #23, by angelica The Spectacular

23rd October 2010:
OK, so this is nuts. I actually read your story over a year ago on another fanfiction site, but it was only like nine or so chapters and I was like "when is this amazing author gonna update?!" And today I googled Mesmerised and came here!

This is probably the best fan fiction I've ever read. But you haven't updated for ten months? You're killing me! I've re-read it like three times before finally finding it here with more golden chapters!

Please please update. I sincerely hope you haven't given up on this, because I sure as hell haven't! (I mean, come on. I GOOGLED it for crying out loud!)


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Review #24, by lily_sfd The Spectacular

19th October 2010:
Really good. uppdate soon please. they need to get together soon

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Review #25, by heyITSme Seeing the Unseen

3rd October 2010: i had to come back to the first chapter to leave a review...and i just have one question to ask, seeing as you haven't updated in a year...

are you dead?

your anxious reader, awaiting james-lily action

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