UPDATE ALREADYAuthor's Response: IM SORRY.
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But im starting t write more now and Ive got some new ideas.
this is absolutely wonderful. very lovely. update soon! Report Review
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Aw, Lily and James are making progress! That's so lovely to see!
I thought you did an overall gorgeous job. Though, there's one small thing I'm concerned about. The fact that Lily didn't pay attention in class. Although, most stories make her out to be this perfect, brilliant girl, so maybe you're taking a different approach. That could be a really good thing...hmm.
Right, so I'm rambling now, but nice job just the same!
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Oo-er, they're so sneaky! :O Report Review
Wow, alot happend. I'm so conflicted! -hops from foot to foot- Remus or Sirius? Gah, this is overloading my braiiin! Report Review
Awwe! Swoon! Ouch! and What a jackass! Report Review
This was cute. I like Sirius. They should go to the dance together. That would be fun! :DDD Report Review
Cute chappy. It felt kinda short though... :( Report Review
This was fabulous! :DDD Good show! Report Review
This was a sad but interesting chapter. The bond her and Lily share made me wish for a best friend like that. Good chapter overall, ten for you! :) Report Review
So she has chosen Remus for the moment...hmm. I must admit, in most any story, I'm a lot more of a Sirius fan than a Remus fan.
If she really felt strongly about either of them, it wouldn't have been such a hard decision for her to make.
She's confused...sad. I love the chapter though! It was lovely!
I like the last part. "Shall we snoop together?" hehe. I love to snoop! lol.
10/10! Report Review
Uh-oh, she really does like Sirius. What's she going to do? Quite a little cliff hanger you've got here to set up the next chapters. 10/10 Elle Report Review
veryy confuzzing emotionss
this girll hass. weelll written.
cant wait to see what plays outt. Report Review
oh no! i like remus and all but sirius should get his girl i mean he loves her remus only likes her, it is v unfair. lol anyway i am sure you have your plans so keep updating fast. 10/10 Report Review
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Though alluring in ways I cannot contain myself from over-complimenting this story.
Its wonderful-Its beautifully formated-Its dramatic-Its not too dramatic-Please up-date
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That chapter was awesome! It is my favourite chapter that I have ever read! I can't wait to read whatever you dish out next!! Report Review
Oh no he didn't! I cannot believe Sirius sad that! That's like...really really mean! GAH! I must forgive him though...he's too amazing to stay angry at. :D lol.
He loves her!! I know it! **grinns foolishly because of the piece of man-candy that is Sirius** GAH! I just love him to bits (even when he's being a git)! haha.
Good ol' Remus letting Sophie snot on his shoulder! Gotta love him! ;) One thing I'm a tiny bit skeptical about: Remus skipping class? That almost seems too James/Sirius-ish. I dunno. He was listening to and helping out Sophie, so I suppose it can be forgiven. lol.
I l-o-v-e-d the whole "I knew that angry voice" thing. That was great!
Excellent chapter 7 lovely! I eagerly await number eight!!!
nana_banana_xx3 Report Review
OK, dying for the next chapter, and I'm begging you to make it longer too! This is really great, like really really great. Report Review
Isn't it horrible when you just start crying around the first person you DON'T want to cry around? I really like this story, so keep updating, you've def won over a fan here.
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I really like this, some people have just torn the marauders to shreds, I was looking for one that had some accuracy and romance, and voila, here's your story. 10/10, def going on the favourites list. Report Review
wow fantastic story please update soon Report Review
OH MY GOD! update asap! will fall off seat otherwise! Report Review
oh, somethings gonna hapen! Report Review
oh that is such a good story so far!
please keep writing.
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