Argh. I thought he was going to tell Sirius! But I like the idea that even though in canon, it was because of Kreacher that Regulus turned against Voldemort, here it was because of Sirius. By the way, I know that song.:) I also adore it. :)

Author's Response: Thank you.

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yeesh...talk about explosive...could just imagine the KABOOM drum beats...it was really good. IT NEEDS ANOTHER CHAPTER!! what happens?...well..we know what happens...but still!! write more...pretty please?? *puppydog pout* PLEASE?

I love the separation that you show between Sirius and Regulus...although it DID get a bit confusing as to who was saying what...but i figured that out *makes mental note not to read too fast*

The only criticism that i can give, is that your flashback wasn't very clear...try putting it in italics, and have maybe a sentence or two leading up to it like: "and it reminded him of something that had happened long ago..." something like that, although less cliche and corny ;)


Author's Response: Yeah, thanks for the criticism. I started doing my memories in italics. I guess this made it here without me doing that. Thanks.

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Oh I see! This is where he gets the idea to go after the locket horcrux! Excellent story idea - very original and so creative! I love music too and am inspired by it all the time (especially musicals!). I can so see this happening, with Sirius choosing his friends over his family, and trying to get Regulus to help him. It's really beautiful. Will there be more to this, or is this a one-shot?

Author's Response: It's a one shot for now, but I will be putting up more song-fics that I write. I write them a lot of the time when I am bored. also make sure you read my long fanfic.

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Wow---intriguing. I don't really know what to say except, great great great job. If I didn't know better, I'd be so so so so worried for James and Lily. Excellent.

Author's Response: Thank you, for your review. I have a novel one hopefully coming out and I might use some of the side stories into it. Who knows.

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its awesome everone read this story its awesome

Author's Response: Thanks...I have another short story in the works.

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