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Review #1, by Snapegirl The Job, The Jewelry, and The Disorientation

1st August 2007:
Great chapter! I'm wondering about Shea, is she a witch?

Author's Response: ...yes. :)

~Meli♥


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Review #2, by Snapegirl Prologue: "Don't judge from mere appearances..."

1st August 2007:
Uh oh, what has she bought? Something cursed? Guess I'll have to keep reading to see! 10/10

Author's Response: You're good. :)

Your writers,
~Meli♥ & he_he_lupin


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Review #3, by Loopy The Job, The Jewelry, and The Disorientation

24th January 2007:
amazing!!! update soon


Author's Response: Okay, we will. :)

~Meli
P/s: We're just waiting for our Betas to look over the next chapter.


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Review #4, by xxMugglePrincess The Job, The Jewelry, and The Disorientation

17th January 2007:
It was interesting, I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Oh, so you can't... Okay. :D

We'll update later! ;)

~Meli
P/s: keep an eye out for the next chapter!


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Review #5, by Loopy Prologue: "Don't judge from mere appearances..."

14th January 2007:
It was fantastic! Keep up the awsome, great, amazing (need to add more adjetives to my vocab) work!

Author's Response: ...Okay, we'll see what we can do. :) We're currently putting up the next chapter and waiting until it gets betaed.

Thank you for your review!

~Meli*


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Review #6, by quoth_the_raven Prologue: "Don't judge from mere appearances..."

12th January 2007:
Uhhh...please continue! You have my interest swirling around and wanting to be appeased.

Author's Response: Yes, the next chapter is coming up. It still isn't together and it still hasn't been betaed. Hopefully by the end of next week another chapter will be up. :) Thank you for your review!

~Meli
P/s: Reviews are help full, they are known as feed-back and apparently we're going good. ;)


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Review #7, by wolke7 Prologue: "Don't judge from mere appearances..."

12th January 2007:
your idea is great, but i'd like to read more descriptions... can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Whoa... Well, there might be more in the next chapter. :) Be patient it'll come up.

~Meli


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Review #8, by Acid Pop Prologue: "Don't judge from mere appearances..."

11th January 2007:
I must say -- very interesting idea for a story. It's definitely got me intrigued, and I'd love to read more. :]

Author's Response: Awesome! I'm getting it going with my hpfan friend (he_he_helupin who is also on this site). Hopefully we'll make another chapter. :D

Thank you for your review!

~Meli


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Review #9, by flutterby271 Prologue: "Don't judge from mere appearances..."

11th January 2007:
Interesting start! I wonder what will happen once Anna's sister puts the necklace on... I'm certain it'll make for an interesting read. Thanks for writing! xx Stefanie

Author's Response: Thank you! I feel like I've been bombarded by reviews, but feed-back is the best thing (food for the story) for an author. :) The necklace, earing, and anklet are the main idea in this fic. Hopefully we'll update... but we have to get the next chapter put together.

Thank you for your review!

~Meli


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Review #10, by Healer_25 Prologue: "Don't judge from mere appearances..."

10th January 2007:
My first question, 1940? thats not too long for a store...especially a London one, just an observation :)
Wow...100 pounds...isn't that something like 200 cdn? thats a lot for me...:o

Heh I'm thinking he's from the back alleys, and I'm curious as to what the crown is now, but I'm not sure if you'll bring it back.

In a word though I would love more descriptions, what does she look like? what does he look like? does all that shows in this store glitter? are there no fabrics? furnishings? Clothes?

But its great keep going!

Author's Response: I was like... "Whoa... all those questions..." Well, you got me going. Anna is of means (she has money). 1940 wouldn't be too long ago, but concerning us... we need to be fooled, so yes, 1940 did better than 300 b.c. or something like that. The crown might come around (I don't know yet, I'm the one who invented it). The descriptions might come along in the next chapter on how she looks like.

Hopefully me and my friend (he_he_helupin) will get this going. Thank you for your review!

~Meli


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