Haha, how..amusing. I love how she's fascinated with her vomit when the world as she knows it is crashing down around her...that would be me. Once again, it's realistic, but I can't wait to know how the plot is going to work. As of now, I haven't been able to figure it out.Author's Response: And that's how it should be. To tell the truth, you'll probably find out most of the plot the moment I do. I mean, I have the general, but I didn't go into detail yet. Thanks for the review! Report Review
Haha, you certainly tricked us up at the beginning. I loved it, though. All the characters seem so real and the predicament they find themselves in is a realistic one-something similar happened with one of my good friends. The way she acts is believable, too. She isn't too understanding or too much in denial. I look forward to reading more.Author's Response: Thanks! First off, I've never written in first person, and secondly, I've never really experienced anything like this. I'm glad people actually like this thing. :] Report Review
"It looked like I swallowed rainbows or something."
I just COULDN'T be sad after that. lolAuthor's Response: Good to know. I had fun with that part, which you may or may not recall. :] Report Review
Since you've been so curtious with reviewing my story, I wanted to return the favor -- at the very least -- once.
This was very good! It was easy to follow, but I think that maybe more dialogue would make it better. Anyway, as you said, I'll just keep holding on and sit tight until the Hogwarts parts come. =]
Author's Response: Why thanks. Yeah, you're not the only one who told me that more dialogue would make it better, but there isn't really much to talk about at this point. Speaking of which, I have to finish typing the second chapter still. Yikes! Report Review
I'd just like to say that you're brilliant! And kudos on a chapter title. lol
So glad you posted this and I'm currently awaiting the snogfest. Oops, have I said too much? Oh well.
Get some pictures so that we can get you a banner already! I think a cute quote for on it would be "Falling hard is what the game’s all about.” So cute!
Post more soon, would you?Author's Response: Well, now I have a reason to type chapter two! I'll type and submit on Sunday! Thanks for being my first review, Tori! Report Review
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