Hi, you reviewed my Snow White Queen song fic so I thought I'd read yours too. :)
I thought this was really good, and although short, you did a good job portraying Hermione's feelings through this. I could feel her hurt and her pain, and I really like the way you interpreted this song. The lyrics are perfect for this story.
10/10. :)Author's Response: thank you.it is short, but it gets the point across. ^_^ Report Review
who was the stalker? did you not say or did i miss it?Author's Response: ron was the stalker Report Review
That was a very disturbing fic. I mean that in a good way, of course. It have a feeling that Ron was the one doing this, but I'm not really sure. The things he says kind of makes me go back and forth on his identity. As for some constructive criticism, the first paragraph could have used more commas. Good job.Author's Response: well, thank you, i will go add some commas!! teehee, it was ron, good guess. Report Review
Okay, who is that perverted bastard?Author's Response: That is none other than ronald Weasly, yes i know scary huh?
argh! who was that other man?
well done. this fic is so well written and has such a well thought idea/plot line.
xxAuthor's Response: the other man...hmmm, i thought i'd given it away!! But thank you!!! Report Review
yikes that sent shivers up my spine! i would've liked to see hermione really get revenge on the dirtbag who raped her!Author's Response: yeah, thanks for the review!! It was fun in a morbid sense to write, it was a little more graphic, but i had to edit it!!! Thanks for reviewing!! Report Review
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