That was really good! I like how you describe everything. It is so poetic and pretty! I think you should make the next chapter h ave more action though. This one was a bit boring. It was still really good though :DAuthor's Response: Hey thanks so much. I have alot more action planned i just need to write it first. its all in my head. thanks for the awesome first review:) Report Review
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