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5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by JamesBlackPower

meet lily evans

10th July 2007:

I loved it! seems really good! please add more! good job! :) :)

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Review #2, by LadyDux14

meet lily evans

9th July 2007:

Its really good so far! I can't wait for the update, you left us hanging! I liked how you added Jame's sister!

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Review #3, by dramapiggy

meet lily evans

10th April 2007:

This story has a good plot, but it has a lot grammatical errors. There are also a lot of misspellings. Fixing those things would make the story a lot better and I think that you should defiantly continue the story.

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Review #4, by JulieRose

meet lily evans

9th April 2007:

I noticed that you kind of switched from first person to third person a lot. And there were also many grammatical errors, for example you never captalized Krystal's name. It's a work in progress!

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Review #5, by Lav

meet lily evans

9th April 2007:

This is good, but I have to wonder-Do you have some sort of aversion to using capital letters? I'd also work on the spelling a bit. But hey, it's the first chapter! You've got some good character descriptions, and lots of good introductory stuff, so just keep going with it!

Author's Response: thanks alot for the feedbaxk it is so tiring typing on a flat keyboard.i havent checked since larry trotter sorry

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