Wow! This is a good beginning to a story! I've got to read more!

Fred Maines

Author's Response: hey look at that, it's me and bella..... but i forgot the reason you reviewed my story? ah well, at least i got some love from myself ha.

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Ok, I just looked at ur profile and ur from TX. So am I, where are u at? I'm from Palestine, about an hour from Tyler. E-mail me: gamergurl91@yahoo.com

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I'm slightly confused, but it's really good so far! Please update sometime soon!

Rebecka

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so wat was rong wiv that then?!
u told me it would be bad but i thought it woz good x
post anuvva soon
xXx

Author's Response: The fact that it's a bad chapter... i dont like it but whateva, if you like it then maybe it's ok.

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I just updated my story,, like u told me too,, so u update yours soon! Cheers x


Author's Response: i just updated mine but no more updates....im going to mexico till thursday, mission trip for church.
♥♥♥-Fred

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awww. how sweet. and funny. update quickly!

Author's Response: Tanks!im trying to update but im running out of time, school is so hectic lately due to the TAKS testing that is about to happen. Yes i am a Texan. Go AGGIES!

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update this soon!its so sweet x

Author's Response: thanks for reviewing, and thanks for sticking with this.

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that was great i loved it. r y writing a 3rd chapter?

Author's Response: thanks, yeah it just validated today and i already sent in the next chapter for validation. Thanks again for the review.

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