Oh my good golly jeezers, in the past like week I have found so many amazing stories just by chance, and this is definitely my favorite one of the day. With just these two chapters I feel completely attatched to the story and your character, and I got really sad when she went to visit his grave.But.that's how good stories should be right?The only thing that irked me was Lucius Malfoy, because he was acting so un-Malfoy-ish. Malfoys aren't to show any emotion and are supposed to take what's given to them.But I'm not saying that it's bad in anyway, because when you think about it, after having been with Dementors for Merlin knows how long, and then to escape just to be tortured by the man you gave your life to ?I'm pretty sure it would drive even the hardest man to tears.
Well, anyways, I really enjoyed this story, and I'll be waiting for the next chapter, and I'll be reviewing each one from now on.
Tis my ways(:
-melissa Report Review
I love it. You're very talented. Keep up the good work! Report Review
Very well written and well paced. I really enjoyed reading this, in fact, I've read it about three times already. Update son. :)Author's Response: I'm trying too! Ugh. School is killing me. But I'm glad you liked it. Thank you very much for the review! :) Report Review
Wow..I really love it!
How did she end up with Voldemort?
How old is she now?
How come you're so brilliant?
Please continue!Author's Response: Aww... Thank you!
So many questions! Well, Elodie is about 19 at the moment. Uhm.. I can't tell you how she ended up with Voldy! That will come soon! Thank you again for the review. :) Report Review
Ohh a ravenclaw, and slytherian...? This was a very interesting read, I enjoyed reading the story very much, and loved how the sentences flowed beautilfully... I can harly wait to hear from you
(Dance with Draco)Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Report Review
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