You have a few grammar mistakes but not many [get a beta, if you haven't already, they are wonderful. Plus they help you translate american words into british.(does that make sense?)] Anyways, this is a really good start to what I'm sure is a really good story. I can't wait to read more.Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know :) I've been looking for one actually.
I also thank you for readin. I have many surprises up my sleeve...so hopefullly my sotry will be exciting. Keep reading! Report Review
Hee hee, Evie's my name! :D Nice to now that other people register that it exsists!! :D
I am also a Slytherin on MNFF, so whaddya know, it's a curious little world!
Good story, especially since it's your first. Although, there were a lot of Americanisms.
~EvieAuthor's Response: Really that's cool >.<
Thanks for the review....and I bet there are a few in there....ha but keep reading the next chapter should be up soon! Report Review
Ahh, please update! I want 2 read more!!! Please!!Author's Response: aww thanks.At least I know I have a fan.More to come I promise. Report Review
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