{reviewid: 1934764, reviewer: 'siriusroxmywhitesox'}
27th May 2008:
Great story!!! But I don't think that you should do an epilogue, just to give it a little mystery. Anywho, great story! You're a great author, keep it up!
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{reviewid: 1934756, reviewer: 'siriusroxmywhitesox'}
27th May 2008:
Haha, a great end for a great chapter!
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{reviewid: 1934707, reviewer: 'siriusroxmywhitesox'}
27th May 2008:
MWUHAHAHAHAHA!!! Forgetfullness Potion is the bomb!! Oh, this is going to be good.
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{reviewid: 1934696, reviewer: 'siriusroxmywhitesox'}
27th May 2008:
Haha, good chapter. Very eventful and a nice length. Great job! Keep it up! : )
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{reviewid: 1934662, reviewer: 'siriusroxmywhitesox'}
27th May 2008:
Good chapter. Very nice idea to include the flash back in the story. It's a very good asset to the story. Good job!! 10/10
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{reviewid: 1792483, reviewer: 'always_jamesandlily'}
15th January 2008:
aw they're all so cute! argh! i cnt think of anything else to say! great story, it was amazing!
xxx
Author's Response: Thank you soo much!
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{reviewid: 1515301, reviewer: 'Moony_and_Padfoot'}
15th July 2007:
An epilogue would be great, I really enjoyed this =) Remus and Stacey were too adorable!! =D 10/10
Author's Response: aww thanks so much!
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{reviewid: 1511052, reviewer: 'My%20Name%20isnt%20Pony'}
12th July 2007:
She gave him a forgetfulness potion.
Author's Response: very good!
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{reviewid: 1508773, reviewer: 'shakespearia'}
11th July 2007:
omg caity ur so good i love this one.=]i havent put any up in awhile i have to finish writing mine but keep going lil' sis ur awesome!!!
Author's Response: aww thanks so much! please update on yours too!
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{reviewid: 1508300, reviewer: 'weasleyswizardwheezes'}
11th July 2007:
Very very cute ending. It was just long enough to conclude everything and was very well written. I think an epilogue would be fabulous! You could even do a sequel to this story if you wanted. The possibilities are endless!
Author's Response: thank you so much! Im not sure if I want to make a sequel at the moment because I am starting a new story soon. Once again, thanks for the review!
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{reviewid: 1451436, reviewer: 'inabena57'}
6th June 2007:
heehee remus finally asks out stacey and sirius comes and interupts it. that is so like sirius to do something like that. =)
great chappie loved it!!
*10-10*
update ASAP
angelina {ib57
Author's Response: of course!
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{reviewid: 1450427, reviewer: 'weasleyswizardwheezes'}
6th June 2007:
Awww. great job! You did a great job describing Remus's date, it was perfect. Can't wait to keep reading!
Author's Response: thank you so much. I had always thought of Remus as the shy, romantic type, so a candlelit dinner was perfect!
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{reviewid: 1450388, reviewer: 'Missis%20X'}
6th June 2007:
lol! i guess she used a mermories potion thing. Do i get the 50 house points?!!! lol jk
rly gd so far 10/10
Author's Response: yes you do get the points! Congratulations!
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{reviewid: 1444257, reviewer: 'inabena57'}
2nd June 2007:
oooh friends thats a step in the right direction yay!!=] lol i can'twait for the update soo update ASAP
rating.:10/10
Author's Response: well i had to have them reconcile in some way didnt i? Keep an eye out for the update!
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{reviewid: 1444245, reviewer: 'inabena57'}
2nd June 2007:
hmmm let me guess a forgetfulness potion? well anyway i liked this chappie figures james wold go back to his old ways when he found out lily started falling for him =]
rating.:10/10*
angelina{inabena57
Author's Response: mmhmm. i figured that it was exactly the sort of thing James would do. thanks!
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{reviewid: 1444218, reviewer: 'inabena57'}
2nd June 2007:
i laughed at the part where he tells her he likes milk . i love how they're thinking the same thing =] awesome chappie *10/10*
angelina {inabena57
Author's Response: yea i love that part also.
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{reviewid: 1444200, reviewer: 'inabena57'}
2nd June 2007:
great chappie i HAVE to go read the next one to see what this plan is =]
anyway rating.:10/10*
angelina {inabena57
Author's Response: haha what a great cliffie no?
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{reviewid: 1444150, reviewer: 'inabena57'}
2nd June 2007:
the first chapter was really funny i liked it very much
rating: 10/10
angelina{inabena57
Author's Response: thank you!
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{reviewid: 1439587, reviewer: 'hp4eva786'}
30th May 2007:
how long will the forgetful potion last though. great chapter. cant wait for the next bit so please update soon
Author's Response: I guess it varies for the amount you drink, but this dose was supposed to last for a couple of days, but someone gave him the anitidote. Thanks for the review!
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{reviewid: 1438450, reviewer: 'LilyMaria'}
29th May 2007:
oh my gosh, this story rocks! I love it!!10/10 I could make you a banner, if you would like. If you are interested feel free to email me at Ghstlily14@aol.com
-much love-
LM
Author's Response: oh my goodness that would be awesome! and thank you a ton for the review i really need the feedback.
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{reviewid: 1435386, reviewer: 'weasleyswizardwheezes'}
27th May 2007:
Very good. Can't wait to keep reading
Author's Response: thank you so much for reviewing!!
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{reviewid: 1424744, reviewer: 'asian'}
20th May 2007:
Awww I know Lily's desperate but geez. Poor James.
Please update ASAP! I really like this story!!
Author's Response: thank you! i really appreciate all of these reviews!
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{reviewid: 1410733, reviewer: 'weasleyswizardwheezes'}
8th May 2007:
Two words: Forgetfulness potion. Great job on this chapter absolutely amazing.
Author's Response: yay! 50 points to...whatever house you'r in! lol. thanks for the review!
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{reviewid: 1410399, reviewer: 'weasleyswizardwheezes'}
8th May 2007:
awesome chapter can't wait to keep reading.
Author's Response: thank you!
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{reviewid: 1408922, reviewer: 'hp4eva786'}
7th May 2007:
what a way to break them up. hilariuos chapter. please update soon. cant wait to read more
10/10 from me
-zadi
Author's Response: thank you so much! i absolutely loved writing this chapter.
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