doesn't cho have black hair ? but it was still cute Author's Response: in the books its blonde :] Report Review
Aw, that was cute. I really liked it. 8/10 (((:Author's Response: ah thanks someone read it YAY haha Gina Report Review
BRILLIANTAuthor's Response: thanks Report Review
its really cute but i was kinda confused because cho doesnt have blonde hair does she? i may be wrong but i got turned around a bit. again this could do with a quick read through as you keep changing tenses but apart from that its very good.Author's Response: she does infact have blonde hair we often forget that cause of the movies but she looks part veela *thats wat her description is* i have a problem with tenses haha thanks for the review! Gina Report Review
it was very very cute, i must say. hehe. Author's Response: why thank you tehe Gina Report Review
Um . . . not to bad of a plot, you should work on your grammer a bit and maybe add some to the story. The idea isn`t a bad one, just needs some polishing. Author's Response: haha yupp thanks! Tonks Report Review
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