its so cute and wonderful


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Like everything of yours that I've read, this was great. You really are an excellent writer =)

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Really, I think you give me too much credit though, they aren't that great, haha. But I think I'm improving so... Just... don't read those earlier ones, haha. =]

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Now that's not nice! You made me cry. Ah well it was worth it-- that piece was wonderful.
Well keep writing!!
Love ~K (10/10)

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CUTE!!! That is so adorable! And what do you mean you don't capture the characters? I think you did a great job!! 10/10 completely!

Author's Response: Thank you! I really don't think I write Lily/James well but, everyone has been so supportive! I'm so glad you liked it! :]

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can i just say that i really appreciate your writing? it makes me happy when you update, so please keep adding to your collection of one-shots. this one is lovely! i think my favorite is either admirer or good morning, stranger. :-D

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad that you like my work, it's really nice to hear. Ahh, yes. Those two were probably the most popular that I can remember. Thanks again!

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Very good story! I liked the pace of the action; you have written a compelling tale. Well done. :)

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Aw i loved that it was great...yu said yu couldn't do James and Lily because they fell out of character but that was brilliant, yu should be proud of it to =D Wow =]
Alex xx

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I appreciate that, I was so worried about this one because I really do think Lily/James is one of my weaknesses but I'm so happy you liked it! Thanks! :]

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Ah, I thought this was really good! I turned out well!! I enjoyed it alot!! well done!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it, I was very nervous! :]

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Awww, it's totally adorable :]]

you should write a sequel :]] Or at least have them say "I love you."

;]]

Hannah

Author's Response: Haha, thanks! I know, it's pretty fluffy... very different from what I usually write but, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm not really thinking about a sequel at the moment but... it's a possibilty. Thanks for reviewing!

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