{reviewid: 1575268, reviewer: 'Hogwarts%20Cupid'}
14th August 2007:
Nice story!
Really kool!
Luv it!
Keep writing!
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{reviewid: 1427241, reviewer: 'JamesLilyHarry'}
21st May 2007:
oooh, can't wait to see what happens. Update Soon!
~JLH~
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{reviewid: 1427231, reviewer: 'JamesLilyHarry'}
21st May 2007:
lol, hilarious! 10/10
~JLH~
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{reviewid: 1368727, reviewer: 'reshathakur'}
7th April 2007:
great story!
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{reviewid: 1364334, reviewer: 'Elle%20Winters'}
4th April 2007:
Hey this is real good:) Happy James lol
But it's not Charlie Weasley aka Ron's brother is it?
Cause he wouldnt've been at school then
Well done though!
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{reviewid: 1356692, reviewer: 'amy'}
27th March 2007:
love it
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{reviewid: 1355204, reviewer: 'JamesLilyHarry'}
26th March 2007:
awesome Update soon!
~JLH~
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{reviewid: 1355145, reviewer: 'wicKeDwitch1316'}
26th March 2007:
The spelling and grammar are much better! Try re-reading each chapter, to edit it and make sure it makes sense, because there are still some boo-boos. It was interesting, glad to see James and Lily being civil to each other! Keep it up!
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{reviewid: 1351656, reviewer: 'JamesLilyHarry'}
23rd March 2007:
pretty good. but one thing really bugged me. there are no quotation marks separating what people are saying a the rest of the sentence. It got a little tricky to read in some places because of that. anyway, pretty good!
JLH~
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{reviewid: 1348395, reviewer: 'Elle%20Winters'}
20th March 2007:
Good but please - inverted commas!!
Well done, do write more!
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{reviewid: 1347872, reviewer: 'A%20differnt%20type%20of%20flower'}
19th March 2007:
pretty good! don t worry i can t spell either!
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{reviewid: 1329549, reviewer: 'isa8311a_grint'}
4th March 2007:
that was good but plz plz plz keep going
Author's Response: Of course im keeping on! I just was on this trip and could not bring my laptop. (actualy, i forgot it) next chap will rrruuummmmmbbbllle!!!!!!!
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{reviewid: 1326449, reviewer: 'wicKeDwitch1316'}
2nd March 2007:
Oh dear James! What are you going to do with him??? (Mock sigh) So I officially LOVE Sirius and James. Keep making them do funny stuff. Snog commentators---AMAZING! I was laughing pretty damn hard! Great job---my fav. chapter so far!
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{reviewid: 1326407, reviewer: 'irish_dorcas'}
2nd March 2007:
i liked sriu' commentry but 1st years he sounds a bit pervy there!i'm gonna say the same thing i said in the 1st chapter!INVERTED COMMAS!please before i go crazy from the lack of them(maybe not) anyhoo please puit them in.it makes it easier to read!
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{reviewid: 1316467, reviewer: 'wicKeDwitch1316'}
22nd February 2007:
I like this story! Sirius is so ridiculous! (in a good way, of course!) So chapter 6 is up for my fic, if you want to check it out! Great chapter, here! Keep it up!
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{reviewid: 1313774, reviewer: 'Cedrics_gurl'}
20th February 2007:
great chapter! one or two things you could improve on tho: use " coz i got a bit confused, the spelling of there and also, Lily needs to come up with a new insult!! lol
great story!!!
Author's Response: Great, thanks a lot! I'll find you an insult worthy of an artist for chap 3! ( cap 2 all ready posted )
Thank you so much for reviewing! ( 60 reads, 5 reviews)
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{reviewid: 1291689, reviewer: 'wicKeDwitch1316'}
3rd February 2007:
Great job. Keep it up.
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{reviewid: 1290607, reviewer: 'permuyy'}
2nd February 2007:
how about some quotation marks? it really makes it muchhh easier to read
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{reviewid: 1274747, reviewer: 'Taz_Devil'}
21st January 2007:
Aww cool!!! Keep it going!!!
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{reviewid: 1272482, reviewer: 'irish_dorcas'}
20th January 2007:
i liked the story but you really need to put ininverted comas('') in the dialogue
Author's Response: Thanks for the tip! I will be carefull about the comas.
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