Great ... I cannot wait to read more and to see what this has to entail..Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
Oooh nyy goodness hahah wow this is actually so funny I like it already :DAuthor's Response: Aw, thank you :) Report Review
AWW! your story is so good! It's now on my favorites! *Claps and a cookie* -CharlyAuthor's Response: aww thanx that means a lot!!! Report Review
so random but i loved it. have you written a sequel yet? if not i want one!
Dilys :)Author's Response: haha no, ive been busy, but i def want to write one, and i will at some point! thanx so much for reviewing! Report Review
Funny and cute story. By the way love the word 'tard'. ;PAuthor's Response: lol, thank u. lol. i love sayin that word, but i wasnt sure if anyone would take offense to it. :) thanx for the review Report Review
i loved this story!Author's Response: lol, im glad!!!!! thanx for being faithful and reviewing! Report Review
aww! u like to go with short and sweet, yea?
Author's Response: yea, mostly. i try to go for long though, but it never really works. lol. thanx for the review! Report Review
i so bet she is going to say yes!!! oh and if she had to choose who to kill, i say kill the cockroach thats crawling on lilys headAuthor's Response: lol. thanx! Report Review
ow wow.. she sure does love to critisize Lil (though she still loves her)Author's Response: yea...lol Report Review
-dogwhisperer26Author's Response: im currently making chp1 of the sequel~ :} thanx for the review! Report Review
I WANT A SEQUALAuthor's Response: lol, ok, i'll start it as soon as possible. but between school, vollyball and actually keeping up with friends, it might be awhile. but i promise it'll be up soon! Report Review
It was awesome! But also totaly random.Author's Response: lol, glad u liked it, yea...it was random, but i guess that was the point of the story Report Review
I really hate it when people,like you inject their moronic personality into one of the characters and write a story from that point of view. I really can't stand it when idiots, like you waste paragraphs describing the clothing the character is wearing. No one cares if the idiotic character in your story is wearing pink lip gloss or a black mini skirt. It really doesn't matter. Please, dear God, do not torture us with a sequel. This one was bad enough, it doesn't even deserve a rating. The most I can say for you is that you can spell and use words in their proper context unlike some of the other retards on this site.Author's Response: ok, well its one thing to voce your opinion, and i thank u for that, but its another to be rube like that. if u didnt like my style of writing, then dont read my stories, but i do like to explain things, the whole point of the story was to be random and funny, and ive had plenty of people who have enojoyed it and i honestly don't care what you think if you'er going to be rude. Report Review
story was hilariousit was so funny that i nearly had tears of mirth in my eyes. if you'r gonna do a sequel make it as funny as this wa ok love the story.
chesi Author's Response: ok, thanx. im glad you liked it. Report Review
your a bloody sadist and i like it * my sister talking ignore her please*
anyway back to me chesi. that was really funny. gotta read the next chap don't i to see what happens ext
chesi Author's Response: lol. ok, thanx. i hope you like the next few chapters! Report Review
love it! and i'd definitely like to see a sequel, with some info about what happens during the time lily & james are dating. that would rockAuthor's Response: yay. ok, thanx. one vote for a sequel... :) Report Review
Yayyy! Altlast! I loved it! Author's Response: haha, im so glad u loved it!! i'll update it soon :O) Report Review
hahah Id like to check out LILY'S ANSWER!Author's Response: lol Report Review
Awww! It was so GOOD! I wanna read the whole thing now!Author's Response: yay!! good, hope u like the rest!! Report Review
Pretty good. Please update soon. That's so funny that they were just turning the handle the wrong diresction. :7)Author's Response: lol, glad u liked it, i will update as soon as possible. i have been so swamped and have had no time to up date recently and not to mention my writers block for about half my stories. im also writing a bunch of new ones so yeah, i'll up date soon, just not reall soon. sry! :) yeah, i loved the last chappy! :O) Report Review
yay! great wonderful banner by me even though it doesnt show up after all my hard work!
*crawls under rock and cries*Author's Response: lol, im still working on that, never fear Saree! it'll show up soon Report Review
i really realy like this story and i hope you keep going with it!
♥~AH~Author's Response: lol, glad u liked it, the next chapter will be up soon! Report Review
Love their personailties, especially Lee's. Great chapter, haha the handle needed to be turned the other way, LOVE IT! 10/10Author's Response: lol, yep, a simple but complicated Lee, lol, glad u likes it! Report Review
Hahahahaha. She knew they weren't locked in there the whole time. That's some hilarious stuff. PLZ update soon. 10/10. Oh and by the way. If I was there with Sirius, I would have done the same.Author's Response: lol, me 2 thanx again!! Report Review
LEE AND SIRIUS KISSING IN A BROOM CLOSTE K-I-S-S-I-N-G! LoL. I make myself laugh too. See, exactly alike...Sorry. i'm a little hyper at the momento. 10/10 I'll be sure to review next chapter too.Author's Response: yay!! thanx Report Review
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