{reviewid: 2356391, reviewer: 'Sorcha15'}
4th June 2010:
I've seen the movie for SPEAK and i loved it.I also have the book but i haven't read it yet.So this is a great crossover.
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{reviewid: 2284270, reviewer: 'MeteorFreak'}
14th January 2010:
Wow. This is really good and I hope you continue it soon!
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{reviewid: 2170829, reviewer: 'riddikulus%20luna'}
22nd July 2009:
This is so sad. Why is everyone so mean to Olivia?
~riddikulus luna
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{reviewid: 2152345, reviewer: '2Lazy2logN'}
30th June 2009:
You already used the names 'Sirius' and 'James' and 'Remus' and 'Peter' so that rules out the murderous.I'm wishing IT is either Lucius or Regulus
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{reviewid: 2149088, reviewer: 'ravenclawbracefaceXD'}
25th June 2009:
ahhh its great :D i like alot
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{reviewid: 2149085, reviewer: 'ravenclawbracefaceXD'}
25th June 2009:
I think it was good, just sad about the Remus thing *sigh*
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{reviewid: 2149081, reviewer: 'ravenclawbracefaceXD'}
25th June 2009:
I love this story :D
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{reviewid: 2149077, reviewer: 'ravenclawbracefaceXD'}
25th June 2009:
IT just kills me, haha. Awesomeee
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{reviewid: 2149069, reviewer: 'ravenclawbracefaceXD'}
25th June 2009:
I'm excited :P I really like this story! Keep it up
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{reviewid: 2149068, reviewer: 'ravenclawbracefaceXD'}
25th June 2009:
You're a super good writer (:
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{reviewid: 2149064, reviewer: 'ravenclawbracefaceXD'}
25th June 2009:
aw, poor girl.
you're so telented though ^_^
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{reviewid: 2126112, reviewer: 'juxtapose'}
26th May 2009:
This is an amazing plot line!! I love how you mix the books together.
You haven't updated in a couple years, so its not likely that you will any time soon. This is what really gets under my skin; people come up with a brilliant idea, and then abandon it.
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{reviewid: 2045574, reviewer: 'LoneLMJ'}
30th January 2009:
I remember somthing close to this story. Happy that I moved on. Don't Know what happened to her to make things this way for her,but I remember. And refuse to go back to it. Not talking for so loong make it so you throght closes and when you finally wan't to talk, You either can't, or you sound like you have a stange acent. Counclers just don't understand. There suposed to. But they don't. Good story. Ceap telling the story. Maby someone will finally get it.
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{reviewid: 2017509, reviewer: 'MistressOfMarauders'}
26th December 2008:
I like how none of the marauders fit into the cliche roles. Peter is an object of Kelly's affection, Remus was downright rude in the second-chapter...they're different but it all makes sense. Nice work,
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{reviewid: 2017503, reviewer: 'MistressOfMarauders'}
26th December 2008:
It's so refreshing to read a story that's not about your typical Mary-Sue. I'm hooked!
Question: do you make banners? Because all of yours are lovely, and I'm looking for a banner-maker if you're interested.
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{reviewid: 1982442, reviewer: 'SilverShadow04'}
6th November 2008:
Aw so sad. I read 'Speak' by Laurie Halse Anderson so I can see the similarities between the two. Good startt.
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{reviewid: 1963898, reviewer: 'dobby94'}
14th October 2008:
this is exactly like the book speak
plagiarism!!!
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{reviewid: 1962923, reviewer: 'Kandi88'}
13th October 2008:
Hey is this from the book Speak? I read that and it was really good!! And the summary kinda sounds like the summary for the book too!!
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{reviewid: 1898561, reviewer: 'Lindsey'}
17th April 2008:
This was one of the most depressing stories I've ever read... and i mean it in a good way! It reminds me of a movie I saw.. Update soon!
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{reviewid: 1868095, reviewer: 'olivia'}
18th March 2008:
this is so weird thats my name and it sounds like me! you are a really good writer by the way. its such an interesting story
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{reviewid: 1859028, reviewer: 'hannahsc'}
9th March 2008:
I think IT is. i won't say in case I'm right. but omg i luv thisQ!
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{reviewid: 1781821, reviewer: 'lunarlovegood'}
6th January 2008:
WOW!! amazing story, I think I might have t re-read as I read it so fast that I think I missed who 'IT' is, or maybe it twas never mentioned. ANYWAY amazing story, please write more asap.
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{reviewid: 1735145, reviewer: 'Lily_Flower27'}
| Review #23, by Lily_Flower27 | Falling |
1st December 2007:
I just finished reading Speak...=)
btw update soon. Please =)
Author's Response: Ahaha, i will.
I know, im WAYYYY behind.
(:!
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{reviewid: 1670574, reviewer: 'ayanastar'}
15th October 2007:
Oh wow. This one was great. Like super great. I totally want to know whats happening! ANywho I totally feel like Olivia. You actually got me shaking at the end. Ok I sound like a freak now. ANyhow great chapter!
Ayana Black-Malfoy
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Shaking?
Wow,:D
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{reviewid: 1670552, reviewer: 'ayanastar'}
15th October 2007:
This is good. It isn't your best chapter but it is one of my favorite. Especially the last section. That was amazing. Loved it. I mean something totally different has most likely happened to Olivia than to me but I find I can relate and I tend to do the same things as her... Great chapter!
Ayana|Black-Malfoy
Author's Response: Ugh, i hate this chapter myself.
Its basically a filler.
xD
But I'm glad you still enjoyed it!
Hmmm,
I hope everything is okay with you, you keep giving hints.
I dunno, maybe its just me.
Aha.
Anywho, i'm so glad you like it so much!
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