{reviewid: 2207501, reviewer: 'lunajane%20elisabeth'}
31st August 2009:
This is a really interesting story. Please write more! :)
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{reviewid: 1891392, reviewer: 'kat%20potter'}
10th April 2008:
please add another chapter soon. 10/10
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{reviewid: 1871016, reviewer: 'adahpfan'}
21st March 2008:
I am just about to add it to my favorites.
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{reviewid: 1871015, reviewer: 'adahpfan'}
21st March 2008:
love it.
100/100
-adahpfan
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{reviewid: 1868075, reviewer: 'sectumsempress101'}
18th March 2008:
Aww...Write more!!! I love it!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm trying, but other stories (and evil school....) are stealing most of my time right now.
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{reviewid: 1815278, reviewer: 'cameo%20ruby'}
1st February 2008:
cool! I can't wait till the next chapter!!! Brilliantly written too
Author's Response: Thank you! This story is so much fun to write, so I'm glad people enjoy reading it :)
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{reviewid: 1803041, reviewer: 'rosai_gryffindor'}
23rd January 2008:
brilliant chapter! well done!!! was kind of complicated trying to keep in mind who is who, and who is whos child, but i enjoyed reading it a lot! especially the lily and snape talks, though it is hard to imagine him with a kid...
anyways, love it! update soon!!!
Rose :)
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{reviewid: 1801832, reviewer: 'ProngsPadfootMoony%20Marauders'}
22nd January 2008:
not even watching the kids. love it.
Author's Response: Oh, the kids aren't being too bad... that is, not this chapter :P
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{reviewid: 1800406, reviewer: 'Hedwig6393'}
21st January 2008:
Yay! I love it! Please write more of it, I can't wait!
10/10
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{reviewid: 1799829, reviewer: 'the_marauders_rock'}
21st January 2008:
I like this story so far. keep updating! 10/10
Author's Response: Whee! Finals are finally over and I hope I'll have time to write in the new semester. I wish I could say this story was my top priority, but I'd be lying. My focus is mostly on The Missing Gryffindors (A special present/request for one of my best friends) and a piece of original fiction I'm hoping to publish. But whenever I have time this story is at the front of my mind.
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{reviewid: 1799731, reviewer: 'onestop_hpfan18'}
21st January 2008:
I liked this chapter. Keep up the great writing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I know of quite a few people (seven in particular--my teachers and my parents!) who think I need to write less. Mostly because I don't pay attention in class because I'm busy doing this.
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{reviewid: 1764906, reviewer: 'I_Love_Dobby'}
25th December 2007:
I like it! Please write more!
Author's Response: I'm close to finishing the next chapter so it should be up sometime after the queue opens again.
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{reviewid: 1746636, reviewer: 'Sarah'}
9th December 2007:
oh my gosh that is so good. i'm going to check on this story very soon to see if you have updated.:)
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{reviewid: 1736342, reviewer: 'MoonyLuvr1456'}
2nd December 2007:
Oooh, this is getting GOOD! 10/10 for a really good story. Awww, I love that Harry has a baby sister - so cute! Please update soon!
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{reviewid: 1735141, reviewer: 'the_marauders_rock'}
1st December 2007:
omg! lol Severus has a daughter! wow! ok then...update soon! ^_^ 10/10
Author's Response: Yeah. I felt, especially after reading books 6 and 7, that Severus has to have a softer side. I'm trying to show that here, I guess.
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{reviewid: 1734598, reviewer: 'rosai_gryffindor'}
1st December 2007:
excelent chapter!! i loved it! and what a cliffie!!! i sooo want to read more! :D and in answer to your question, you got the balance of names/nicknames for the marauders absolutely perfect! it worked really well! only one question though... as best friends, wouldnt remus have been to visit the potters before, and met harry and cierra? it seems strange that they would have lost contact over the years...
anyways, love it! update soon!!!
Rose :)
Author's Response: Well, yeah, I had some trouble with that... My thinking is, since losing touch with even your best friends happens often enough in real life, it wasn't too much of a strech for fiction. Believe me, I've lost contact with some of my best friends. You mean to drop by, then you don't, then it seems like too much trouble with work and all... I guess that's life. Also, I think I'm having Remus go to another country for a while...
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{reviewid: 1734078, reviewer: 'Kimberley'}
1st December 2007:
Wow! I love your story, it's absolutley great! Your story is original in it's way and I am enjoying it immesnely. Please write more as soon as you can.
Kimberley
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{reviewid: 1733515, reviewer: 'Eva'}
30th November 2007:
Hey Willow, I immensely enjoyed reading your first three chapters!
I think the nicknames were just fine... and I especially loved the scenes involving the children, they are very realistic... reading your story, I see them in front of me :-)
Author's Response: I'm glad you think they're so realistic! I based a lot of their antics off of my nephews, who are seven and five. And thank you for all your wonderful answer-question-ness (yes I know that's not even close to being a word - oh well). You are wonderful!
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{reviewid: 1733427, reviewer: 'serendip'}
30th November 2007:
I LOVE!
MOREMOREMOREMORE
ITS AWESOME
~ALI
Author's Response: You sound like my friends! I'll do my best, but finals are coming up and about three of my subjects are going to be killer. Well, that probably means I'll be writing a lot because it's wonderful stress relief!
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{reviewid: 1732990, reviewer: 'onestop_hpfan18'}
30th November 2007:
I thought you did a great job. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Update soon please. 10/10
Author's Response: Next chapter is close to being done but I do have a few other things to address first, not the least of which being school. Finals week is coming up and I am dreading it!
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{reviewid: 1732796, reviewer: 'Bianca_Potter'}
30th November 2007:
Aww that was really cute, I really enjoyed it!
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{reviewid: 1634943, reviewer: 'justtosay'}
18th September 2007:
can't wait to the next chapter. I wonder what james and sirius is going to do to snape.
Author's Response: That comes in chapter 4, I think. Maybe 5. Probably 5, seeing as I've finished 4 but not 3. Muses are selective things.
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{reviewid: 1626520, reviewer: 'Kestral'}
12th September 2007:
Very cute
Author's Response: Thank you :P
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{reviewid: 1626373, reviewer: 'GoodieGal'}
12th September 2007:
please update soon
Author's Response: Trying!
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{reviewid: 1586606, reviewer: '_Emma_'}
20th August 2007:
Good chapter, update soon
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