great plot! nice twist to everything, but i guess i would suggest making the pace slow down a bit, you know, more believable? anyways great job!

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I can't tell you how happy I am that your stories work again, I remember reading them two years ago, and I'm just glad to see you're back!

Author's Response: You'll be hard pressed to ever really get rid of me :D

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good job it was really good i like how u included vernon because not many people do that in their stories

Author's Response: Vernon is too easy to have fun with, how could I exclude him?

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What about Melanie??

Author's Response: We'll youll find out

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Waaiiittt... Huh? How does Harry dearest fit into this equation?
Great story! :)

Author's Response: Eventually

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You don't have to describe every little detail. It gets repetitive when you describe everyone's outfits or, for example, "Belle hugged James, making sure to tell him to look after Lily. The she hugged Lily, no tears were shed, instead the promise of seeing each other soon. Honey hugged Sirius and was mildly surprised to find she quite liked it..." But the plot is excellent! This is actually my second time reading this story and I still love it after five years of abandonment! :)

Author's Response: Five years? Gosh that makes me feel old, how much have we all grown together? But I know, I've changed as a riter since, so yeah

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Your grammar is terrible, but your plot is incredible. I love it (except the bad grammar)! :)))

Author's Response: I'm serverly Dyslexic but thanks.

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Wow, I do NOT like her family.
She can't call her mum mum??
That is horrible.
I feel so bad for her.
I LOVED it. :)

-Siriuslover177

Author's Response: Its not that uncommon, even today, but then again, its not an open thing.

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Ha, I love James. :P
They're cute together. :P
I loved this chapter.

-Siriuslover177

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it

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Wow, totally not expecting that!
Ha, they weren't in the 'in' crowd. :P
Loved this chapter.

-Siriuslover177

Author's Response: Who wants to be in the 'in' crowd anyway?

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Wow, that was crazy.
Sirius sounded freaked!
I loved it. :)
I can't WAIT to see what happens at the party.

-Siriuslover177

Author's Response: Just going to have to read on

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Good starting.
I wonder what will happen..
I hope there aren't any fights anything soon. Haha.

-Siriuslover177

Author's Response: Whats wrong witha good fight?

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i know james is just trying to protect her but still, what a prat!

Author's Response: He means well... That doesnt always come across

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so i have to do my homework, so back at chapter fifteen i was like "oh, i'll stop after chapter twenty." great choice, right? akshfoiadhgjdaskghidghoiadhgkadhgkahkghadgadigjadsjf sdf YES JAMES AND LILY!

Author's Response: LOL brilliant choice, but get your homework done!

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d'aw.
so cute! i never imagined them getting together like this but i like it! it's different!

Author's Response: I wanted to keep things a bit more simple

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awww this is so sweet! Kinda scary though... my brother was born on the 7th of May and his name is Christopher! :S but we call him Chris. Great story, really keeping me interested here! :)

Author's Response: I'm glad I've got you hooked

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Love it a lot :) 10/10 for this chapter :)

Author's Response: Thanks :D

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Lawl, very good first chapter. I like it :) 9/10. (It's too short xD)

Author's Response: Thats fair enough

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I love this story I already red it but I'm reading it again are you kind of obsesed with James and Lily Nm, man I wish I could think of a story like it:) I love this story

Author's Response: lol, thanks, it's a complicated story, and very easy to loose track of, but thanks :D

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Oh man how could you, i really wished u'd have have kept james and lily alive, i mean u had already deviated so much from jkr. sigh, i kno there's a sequel but really wished this one had ended happy for now, and u spilt up the babies, couldnt lily and james' friends have taken them in, really sad. ur writing is really good, i was just saddened by the outcome.

Author's Response: I'd have loved to, but I knew for the character development that I wanted in the sequel jsut couldn't allow for Lily and JAmes to Survive.

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no stinking way i have imagined this song used for harry potter since it first came out! I love keep holding on it sucks that eragon used it. But i just started reading the story really good! But why does everything happen to lily?

Author's Response: Everythign happens to Lily becuase she is the key to it all beginning, if Lily doesn't survive or gives up, Harry will never be born..

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ZOMG! love the story! but i still can't forgive James for dating Brie while Lily was in coma. LOL. and i tried at the end. so super sad. i knew it was going to happen, but the kids being split up.

Author's Response: yeah, it kinda sucks, but you should go on and read the sequel, what you don't know

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this is the best!? keep it up!?!?

Author's Response: I will try :)

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Hey! I was just rereading this- and I youtubed this song!
Heavens! That is SUCH a good song! =)

And you're writing is even better than it was the first time round =)

Author's Response: well I guess you will be happy to hear then That I am going to go through it once more. :)

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*Wipes away a tear drop* I hate knowing how everything ends for James and Lily. So sad, Ok i'm going to read the rest of the story!

Author's Response: Maybe it doesn't.

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